I enjoyed Draco's reactions to things in the chapter. His comment about the Monster Book must have surprised some including Hagrid. It's nice that Hagrid's lesson turned out well this time. And Neville got a well needed boost to his courage.
Really, I've enjoyed this! I like what you've done with Draco (hopefully poor Neville will be able to look past his own fear ~haha). I can't wait for more Severus and Harry scenes. (Snape needs a good reality check, and Harry needs someone strong on his side.) Thank you, and I'm waiting for another great read! (~.^)
Your character descriptions are very nice. I especially enjoyed Lupin's thoughts about Snape and his relationship with the staff. It's a shame we didn't learn more about the staff in the books. Since it was about Harry and the students, I know it wouldn't have come up, but it still would have been interesting.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 23 Jun 2017 7:19 pm
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Loved having Dobby in Y3 and of course all the others, thank you so much
| Title: Chapter 4
| 23 Jun 2017 3:31 pm
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I did wonder at the change of weather when they arrived and wondered why they didn't notice it, but fine if it's meant. Great chapter loved the meeting of Remus and Harry
| Title: Chapter 3
| 23 Jun 2017 3:16 pm
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Lovely healing chapter thank you
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Jun 2017 10:14 pm
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Thank you an interesting chapter
| Title: Chapter 1
| 22 Jun 2017 9:54 pm
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A very impressive start to an original story thank you
I think you've headed off on a good start. You have my interest, and I await more of your muses. (~.^)
Also don't worry about being "not canon enough". I like a good change in the things I read!
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