| Title: Thanks, I Hate it
| 06 Oct 2018 7:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry I can't believe that no one has not checked up where he is! Thank you a great chapter
great adventure in the cave!! did harry goes with fudge!! hope severus can locate him, before he get hurt, again!
| Title: My Icy Heart! It's Melting!
| 20 Sep 2018 3:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating. Poor Harry why was he left alone like that Dumbledore should be hexed. Please send Severus to the rescue soon
You actually made me sputter and scream in a mixture of disbelief and outrage while at work! FUDGE! ARGH WHAT AN AWFUL MAN! ... And you left it there.
What'll I do until the next chapter? Ugh.
I'm still following; please don't abandon this! Poor Harry is in quite the predicament now, isn't he?
THanks for the update! It was a great chapter!
| Title: I May be Dumb, but that's not MY fault
| 02 Aug 2018 11:37 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Exciting story- well written,
I don't take to constant cliff-hangers, and that cave---
I needed to see starlight in the story,phew.
How will they strongarm the Artful Dodger? How will Severus feel as a uncertain father/ protector? will Harry faint with pain, realistically as a wounded human? Will they hitchhike home, or catch a few Icelandic ponies,- which are very strong for their size. they can easily carry even a 6.1"potions Master,- or will they toddle along as Muggles?
Will Sev tease Harry? Alan Rickman had a dry, splendid wit. Oh, how his intelligent, courteous warmth is missed in these intolerant, loud times...
Please write more soon..when life
allows it.
Having read, daily, fanfics for 8 years now, I can admit there too many,
about eighty percent, gorgeous, talented, brill! stories that stay as unfinished torsos; that horrible habit makes me so sad.
Authors and authoresses, please, I beg you, do write the whole story out first in pencil, then start to post one chapter after another. This reader would dance with joy. Haven't you,authors/ readers, ever been sad that something beautiful was just cut off?
Thank you for writing this, and I am looking forward to where it will wander.
Have a splendid summer.
| Title: I May be Dumb, but that's not MY fault
| 15 Jul 2018 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter but I'm worried about the fate of the woman who helped them! By the way, very few trees on Shetland
I was so worried they'd be stranded there! Even though I'm not sure how I feel about their new hosts, given how the lasts ones treated them
Sooo glad they got out of there! Gosh the difference between the beginning of this story and end is so interesting, they're basically friends now. Great job with character development! A lot of stories tend to rush it but you certainly didn't! This chapter was great, I especially loved the parts when it was clear that Harry was concerned about Snape. They've both changed into more accepting and caring people. Thanks again for updating, can't wait for the next chapter! I hope they can finally make it home :D
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