Love it! Thank you very much for this chapter. I can't wait for the next one :)
Title: I Regret Everything
| 25 Jun 2018 8:36 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Uh uh another cliffie! Fantastic chapter I love their interaction thank you
Can't this deranged asshole stay dead!!!!
Thanks so much for updating!!! I love this story, the character development is great. Ahhh I have to find out what happens next! I hope they can get back to Hogwarts soon, where it's easier to recover safely. So glad they escaped the group though, that was really intense. As usual, you portrayed the characters perfectly, while also making the plot interesting. You're a wonderful writer, can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Can Someone PLEASE Give me a Hug
| 02 Jun 2018 8:13 am
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Reviewer: OhMyLeppy (Signed)
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Aaaaaa poor Harry, I'm gonna wait anxiously for the next chapter
AHH this is so intense ahhhh I can't wait for the next update! Great idea though Snape, I wasn't sure how he'd be able to get into the camp. Ugh they were so close to escaping!!! Ok I love this story, it's so unpredictable and interesting. Also it's really cool to see Snape slowly learn to care for Harry. You're truely a fantastic writer. Thanks so so much for updating, Chapter 11 will be awesome!
Author's Response: WOW, thankyou so much for taking the time to say that. I really can't tell you how much that means to me
Title: Can Someone PLEASE Give me a Hug
| 16 May 2018 5:37 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow very dramatic chapter thank you! I notice that we again have a cliffie, you like to keep us in a state of suspense! I'll try to breathe before you update
Author's Response: Hahahaha, I gotta admit I'm a sucker fo a cliffie. What writer isn't? Thanks for commenting
Ahhh this is getting so crazy!!! I found Undiscovered a few hours ago and was immediately obsessed with it, you've got such an interesting story plot. It's like nothing I've ever read before. You've somehow incorporated Snape/Harry bonding with an adventure fantasy story, also with hints of mystery and puzzles. And wow, the way you've slowly had their relationship develop is perfect. It's hard to find stories like yours, especially stories that are being updated! Thank you so much for writing Undiscovered, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Wow that review is simply amazing! your description is seriously awesome and inspires me so much. People like you are honestly every author'd dream. I hope I can continue to entertain you!
Title: SSsssssecrets
| 17 Apr 2018 11:22 pm
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Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter. Poor Harry. Hurry Severus.
Author's Response: Thankyou! :)
Title: SSsssssecrets
| 16 Apr 2018 2:54 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow a fantastic cliffie thank you so much for this wonderful story I loved the secrets they told
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I couldn't resist a good cliffie hahah, and I did think on the secrets they would tell for awhile. I really didn't want them to be something to lame.
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