| Title: Chapter 16: Goodbye... I Love You
| 05 Jan 2020 1:02 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Why wouldn’t Severus leave himself a pensieve memory of his history with Lily and Harry? Or have Poppy or someone else he trusts explain this to him. This doesn’t make sense tome except to create more angst.
| Title: Chapter 15: Why did he have to fall
| 31 Dec 2019 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Well I wasn’t expecting that!
| Title: Chapter 15: Why did he have to fall
| 25 Jul 2019 5:18 am
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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what a cliffy now! just when harry made up with ron and hermione!! hope to find out, what happen to harry soon!
hope the rift between will end soon! like that harry has a room in severus' s quarter!!
Glad Harry listen to Severus & hope their father/son relationship will be on the right track.. great job..
| Title: Chapter 11: Just tell me you didn't know
| 18 Feb 2019 3:41 am
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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oh no! hope their a spell to heal harry! great cliffie!
| Title: Chapter 11: Just tell me you didn't know
| 17 Feb 2019 9:33 pm
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| Reviewer: ARim (Signed)
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Oh, a steep cliffie-
uh, please update soon. Don't let Harry bleed too much over his father's night slippers before healing him.
They are very alike in rash-temper, and Sev and Harry could have use of the brill RADA's maxim:
"Think, Breathe, Speak."
I really like your details of their daily calm, ordered life, and that the impestuous childish, stunted Sirius was able to reflect and write to Severus.
Dumbles made me grit molars; he is so unfeeling and blinkered.
Looking forward to reading more about them all. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 9: Am I really leaving home?
| 14 Jan 2019 6:16 am
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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waiting to find whether harry will choose to live with sirius permanently ! still a great story...
glad he has new clothes!! severus can make joke!! onward to next chapie..
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