| Title: Chapter 2: You come, only to go
| 07 Dec 2018 7:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I like your story but would like it better if you changed lines when a new speaker starts. It makes it easier to read. I hope you don’t mind me mentioning this it is only meant as constructive criticism
| Title: Chapter 7: Memories lost, and memories found
| 21 Nov 2018 11:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed)
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hope to read more of the story, one day!!
| Title: Chapter 5: Not 1, not 2, but 3 letters
| 19 Mar 2018 5:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Aidely (Signed)
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OMG I am loving this story. I hope you write more soon it keeps me busy on slow work days. I can't wait to read about the letters on Harry's birthday!
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (Re-written)
| 24 Jan 2018 6:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for starting the story
Normally I'm all about respecting your guardians but this time I'm on Harry's side for this. Snape had absolutely no right to take the invisibility cloak away from Harry. Other than a few pictures of his parents that's all he has to remember his dad by. He has nothing to remember his mother by.
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