Harry, Harry, Harry. Draco warned you not to mother-hen Snape because it would drive him crazy but you just wouldn't listen. You did a good job showing how annoying that would be. I would have bitten his head off.
I loved the first one, and I can’t tell you how excited I am that yoiu are continuing it! Dear Harry is such a sweetheart, but maybe too much of one right now. Nonetheless, it makes sense of why he would act that way. In a way, Severus coming back to Harry was like regaining Harry’s entire world. Beautiful beginning (if not a bit heart breaking). I can’t wait to read more! (~.^)
Author's Response: You'll be happy to know that the second installment (Part II) is finished and edited. It is six chapters long and will be posted at a rate of one chapter per week. At this point, I foresee three installments (Parts) in all. Enjoy!
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