The beginning of this fic is really promising and I can not wait to read the rest ... although I do not really like the summary ... there are too many spoilers for my taste!
I would certainly have preferred to discover the presence of Draco later ...
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad you're liking the story! And that is an interesting comment about the summary, I'll take it into mind. :)
| Title: Broken
| 27 Jan 2019 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic I love your sarky Severus, very well done
Author's Response: Severus is always my favorite to write, I'm glad I am doing him justice!
| Title: Prologue
| 27 Jan 2019 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very dramatic thank you an excellent chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Uh oh.... more please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed! <3
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