| Title: A Shred of Hope
| 04 Oct 2019 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the story and how you portrayed Severus stern but fair thank you
Oh if only!
This was nicely done. I enjoyed Harry watching Snape interact with the little Slytherin. His appeal to Snape was heartbreaking. I love that Snape is still Snape- task-master and disciplinarian, yes, but not a villain. He is so exactly the sort of parent that Harry needs. I would love to see this continued someday, but unlike most of the other one-shots I have read in the contest, this one can stand alone since it reads like a complete work. I'm giving it my first ten.
this story deserves a sequel! Absolutely!
I love your stories!
Awwwww. No wonder Harry doesn't mind the "dire consequences" it might have if he doesn't shape up.
It is guaranteed to be better than the Dursley standard behaviour!
(I wonder if part of the reason for Harry's lack of trying in school is that the Dursleys are never happy with him no matter how hard he tries. If hard work never pays off, you get rather demotivated.)
Oh no!!! Its just a one-shot!!! it was perfect! I loved it. I would have loved a sequel
But anyway, thank you
Gosh! I've missed your writing while you were on break. This was such a sweet one-shot. I loved it!
Awww, I loved it. thanks for writing and sharing. :D
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