That was a beautiful cross-over! I really liked it and hope you write more.
Title: The Shape of Your Soul
| 29 Dec 2020 5:26 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love the His Dark Materials and you have made an excellent cross over
Although strange, this is a very sweet story.
I really like this and hope you add to it.
AHHHHHHHH! I LOVE THIS! Im so glad that you chose to respond to my challenge. This is amazing! You did awesome! I'm glad I'm not the only one to think that Snape's Daemon is a panther! (Also, my name is Sam, so having Harry's Daemon name as Samson or "Sam" is awesome) A new fave!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! Thank you for making the challenge too! I’m a big fan of Phillip Pullman’s world and when I saw your idea to introduce this to the world of Harry Potter I was immediately on board! Yes! Snape is very panther-like isn’t he?!? Oh wow! What a weird and wonderful coincidence! I’m glad you liked it Sam! I intend to convert this little one shot into a multi chapter fic with a bit more of a story behind it, so if you have any further ideas on where I could take this AU I’d love to hear from you!!! Thank you for the lovely review!
Title: The Shape of Your Soul
| 16 Oct 2019 10:31 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wow, I loved the emotions in this! Loved the descriptions of the little soul animals. I wish Jana would give Samson comfort too. Snape is usually more reserved. I could see his "soul" unconsciously being nicer to Harry and Samson without it being too obvious. Loved this little snippet. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: Yes!!! I thought this too when I finished it! I’m too lazy to go back and edit it though, but don’t worry I intend to make a multi chapter fic based on the world of his dark materials and will definitely create a relationship between the pair unconsciously through their daemons! Thank you for the wonderful review! x
Interesting - everyone's daemon is the opposite sex, except Harry's. I wonder if that means something?
Malfoy is such a horrible person - making fun of someone's soul has got to be the rudest thing ever!
Poor Harry! And poor Snape. You know you are messed up when you have to tell children to not be like you.
Author's Response: Ah! You noticed! Yes, perhaps I can delve into that if I continue with this story. Ahaha yes malfoy is very cruel in this one shot! Thank you for the lovely review!
Title: The Shape of Your Soul
| 09 Oct 2019 7:58 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting idea and very well done I hope you continue with the story
Author's Response: Thank you very much! And I do hope to continue this when I have the time!
I don't know what you were worried about Alicia, this is great! I loved it and I agree, you should definitely continue this once the challenge is over. I loved Snape's portrayal in this, and Samson was just precious.
I don't usually leave a review for any work, but...well done!
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you so much! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! I really would like to continue this and turn it into a multi chapter fic, if you have any ideas where I could take i would really appreciate it! Thank you again! :)
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