Brilliant story, I honestly didn't see that twist with Snape coming. I also like how you made it more that he was manipulated and coerced into the roll, as well as what Dumbedore did to protect him. I also really loved the character development you gave.. well, everyone, really. Bravo!
| Title: Two Stories Are One
| 23 Nov 2019 9:25 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Ohhhhh this was so, so, so good. Best thing I’ve read in awhile. Marvelous job.
I loved the delving into Snape’s psyche. The protective relationship Albus had with Snape. How Snape was groomed to be a Death Eater, how it all came tumbling apart.
I love how Snape protected Harry, how the more Snape spent on Harry, time or money, the more he cared for him. That was beautiful development.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Super fantastic well done. Thank you soooo much for coming up with this story, for putting the time into writing it and sharing it with us.
| Title: Two Stories Are One
| 18 Nov 2019 12:23 pm
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| Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
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This is a such a unique take on what Snape's relationship with James during their Hogwarts years could have been like, the way you managed to fit it in is nothing short of awesome. The portrayal of Voldemort's rise is also great, though it does change canon a little bit, but I'm all for it!
| Title: Two Stories Are One
| 16 Nov 2019 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting idea very well written. I loved the hug at the end!
You have a real gift for dialog. It sounds very natural.
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