| Title: The Same But Different
| 23 Nov 2019 7:59 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fantastic!! I love, love, love this story. Snape being nice, buying Harry a book bag, treating him better than Draco.... awww. I love how Dumbledore and Ron are helping Harry to see past his prejudices.
I’m really enjoying the dual perspectives of Snape and Harry. Snape being so private and hidden with some things is wonderfully in character. I love the immaturity in Harry growing and developing to understanding things better.
Snape teaching Harry about coping skills is golden. The fact that Snape learned it from Lucius Malfoy is soo good. Haha he definitely can’t tell Harry that one.
I’m loving this story. It’s fantastic so far! Thank you for writing and posting it!
| Title: Duality - This Like That
| 23 Nov 2019 6:53 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woooow. Wow oh wow. Great emotions in this. Fantastic start! It’s really intense. I really like how it was all crafted, Harry being angry and claiming a dragon hurt him... Snape being more patient and crafty than usual. I even like your Dumbledore.
I’m loving all the characterizations, even the minor ones. Great job with Ron especially.
I’m glad that Harry told in the end. I hope his beliefs can be proven wrong. I really liked the backstory with Severus and his emotions about it. The analogy about the other shoe being dropped tied everything in nicely.
Fantastic start. I’m really enjoying this story and your writing. Well done.
Amazing story thus far! But I'm worried about Hedwig...? Was Harry able to rescue her when he went back to Privet Drive to get his stuff? Am very caught up in this version of Severus, who is still struggling with his own demons as he attempts to get Harry to face his Dragon/troll/hippogriff... So glad they've managed to open a thread of communication at last. But where will they go next?
| Title: Two Stories Are One
| 18 Nov 2019 12:23 pm
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| Reviewer: emrice (Signed)
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This is a such a unique take on what Snape's relationship with James during their Hogwarts years could have been like, the way you managed to fit it in is nothing short of awesome. The portrayal of Voldemort's rise is also great, though it does change canon a little bit, but I'm all for it!
| Title: Two Stories Are One
| 16 Nov 2019 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting idea very well written. I loved the hug at the end!
| Title: The Same But Different
| 16 Nov 2019 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter thank you
| Title: Duality - This Like That
| 16 Nov 2019 8:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well told story. I like your Harry and Severus and the back story of James and Remus was very plausible thank you
You have a real gift for dialog. It sounds very natural.
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