Amazing. Simply amazing how you manage to go from an impulsively thrown snowball between two antagonist characters, to a believable trust and affection between guardian and ward — all in one chapter! What a creative way this story unfolds with Minerva and Poppy complicit in protecting Harry. Big kudos and thanks so, so much for this great story!
A wonderful story with a satisfying ending. Loved it!
Absolutely loved this! The whole theme of Harry's scars was so poignant. Thanks for writing!
| Title: The Luckiest Shot
| 03 Mar 2020 3:26 am
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| Reviewer: krosi (Signed)
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This was a great story and definitely has my vote. Well written and a wonderful chain of events in a realistic way. Thanks for the read!
I love the dynamic between them all.
What a neat story! I like the idea that the three staff members kidnapped Harry for the summer. I bet Harry liked it, too.
I loved it!!! The first part with angry Harry was so dramatic and great. I loved the plan, moving Harry every couple of days. Fantastic that Minerva and Poppy were in on it too.
And when Snape said, “I love him.” So beautiful.
This is a really realistic way it could of happened. I liked how in character and close to canon it was.
I loved the new house and the painted room that is now Harry’s. So sweet. Fantastic ending. Thank you for writing and sharing!!!
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