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Title: Found (Part 1) 24 May 2023 1:19 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Lucius and Narcissa can be helpful. Thanks for another terrific chapter!
Title: Found (Part 1) 22 Aug 2021 10:00 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Really well done! You've skillfully conveyed each of Harry's feelings beyond anything that Rowling wrote in canon!

    She wrote as a child would without depth or understanding of how a child, raised in such a poisonous environment and beaten down every moment that he could remember would actually act and react!

    Do *not* attempt to defend or legitimize her and her books to me!

    I'm 59 years old and have read classic Fantasy & Science Fiction my entire life! I also used to review Children's and Youth Fiction for my local library!

    The truly sad thing is that because children and adults under 30 were discouraged from reading and have nothing to measure this garbage against, they think Rowling is "wonderful"! Well, can truthfully say that it's some of the worst writing I've ever read!

    Your 2 chapters stand "head and shoulders" above hers on any scale you'd care to use!

    Funny but related digression: When I read the books in 2005, the American versions had beautiful covers, but I recently saw the original cover art for the UK versions. They look like they were drawn by a TEN-YEAR-OLD and not a very talented 10-year-old either!

    As that's the level of writing that I found when attempting to read them, I'm not terribly surprised!

    What did surprise me was the level of unattributed *plagiarism* that Bloomsbury either allowed or conspired to; I recognized characters, plotlines, and scenes from classic stories on a single read-through! What "she" wrote (or the ghostwriters at Bloomsbury) was a highly *pushed* and financial "golden goose" of a FANFICTION without attribution to the writers she *stole* from!

    Your writing is terrific and if you're not intimidated by the process, something that you should seriously think of pursuing!

    Really, really well done!
    Thank you!
    MelJ

    Author's Response: Hey, I know you sent this reply 2 years ago but I just wanted to say that I really appreciated everything you said. I saw this a lot closer to when you posted it and it always inspires me whenever I see it again. (Apologies for not replying then, I was 17 and overwhelmed that I was receiving any comments, let alone praise lol) But thank you, I appreciate it
Title: Found (Part 1) 19 Nov 2020 4:34 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Just re read this story, it would be great if you could complete it sometimes

    Author's Response: This comment is what made me spend four straight hours finishing chapter two (it's like a month later but I thought you might appreciate it) :)
Title: Found (Part 1) 03 Aug 2020 6:51 am
Reviewer: Cayj (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Lucius can and will help. Draco is so cute here and Dumbledore can go suck an egg with his manipulative crap. Harry's only a child, it should not even cross Severus mind to take him back to that abusive neglectful mess. Would love to read more of this
Title: Found (Part 1) 23 Jul 2020 9:47 am
Reviewer: Handa (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter, i love the Draco and Harry interaction :)
Title: Found (Part 1) 21 Jul 2020 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter well worth the wait! I loved how the boys interacted together and Severus and Harry were so sweet. I hope Lucius has a plan
Title: Found (Part 1) 18 Jul 2020 1:51 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy, hopefully they figure out a way to save Harry.
Title: Found (Part 1) 18 Jul 2020 8:40 am
Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good

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