Potions and Snitches
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Title: Found (Part 2) 24 May 2023 1:29 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was absolutely heart melting.
Title: Found (Part 2) 22 Aug 2021 11:36 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoys (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, you could definitely use a Beta for spelling and proofreading, but the *feeling* is there; the ability to build a scene and wring pathos and/or humor from it!

    You must either be a parent, have an excellent memory, or have dealt with children because your characterizations of Harry and Draco are spot on! And Draco is delightful!

    I was very impressed as well as surprised when you had Draco pick up his own toys and tidy up AND that he didn't ask for one thing for himself on his quest for the perfect "Welcome home" gift for Harry!

    I know that makes him very OOC or maybe this is the Draco that could have been at 7-years-old; I always pictured him as a magical version of Dudley (or James Potter!), but without the "overfeeding" syndrome of the Dursleys.

    I always felt that what Petunia and Vernon did to Dudley was another kind of child abuse: Overindulging, overfeeding, no boundaries, no consequences for behavior that later as an adult will see him in and out of prison and, in all probability, dead before he's 30. If not in a back alley fight with the wrong person then of a heart attack.

    In their twisted quest to show Harry just how much he's not wanted and despised they're raising a monster!

    There's kind of an ironic twist there: Dumbasfu** raised Harry as a sacrificial lamb and the Dursleys raised Dudley as a pig to slaughter.
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    I'm really hoping that your "Epilogue" puts a nice big "F-U" stick in Dumbasfu**'s spokes!

    Thanks!
    MelJ
Title: Found (Part 2) 21 Dec 2020 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating your lovely story. I’m so sorry that my request made you write for four hours but the result is amazing!

    Author's Response: no dont worry! it was a good motivation!

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