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Title: Weighing One's Worth 07 Sep 2022 12:18 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    OK... I wanted to stop reading now and save it and I am sure now there will be a hole - when I click next it is not loading (empty space), and when I choose from list "The Almost Apologies" it skip to "the guest of MM". Knowing my luck you won't be around, but if so could you try to fix it? Thanks...
Title: Weighing One's Worth 07 Sep 2022 12:13 am
Reviewer: Sirena (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't really get what Severous is aiming at (and I don't get what set him of sometimes too, 5 Harry on that). Is he wanting to throw Harry to Dumbledore? Because I got bit pissed of when he told Harry to "not call it that" when Harry named shop home (and I want to be wrong about it :/) and I am pretty sure Sev refered same way to it while taking Harry back after his run away. So either he is not managing his own feelings or planing to get rid of kid... or both really. (drama sigh)
    Overall concept of the story is interesting, I have to admit I needed to go back to main page to check summary about magic thing, cos I wasn't sure is it there or not, some things looked like they could have been magical~ I am not really knowledge in history, but I am buying what you are selling here.

    PS.
    There is no chapter 11? I am ending my reading for now, but I hope there is no hole there since there are two 12? Cos I am coming back here for more!
Title: Weighing One's Worth 11 Oct 2020 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Shell (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for updating. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting ^^
Title: Weighing One's Worth 01 Oct 2020 8:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you Severus is being very unreasonable with Harry. He asks Patil to talk to him and when Harry, not surprisingly, let’s out his real name he is angry. Harry has had an emotional and distressing day and he has made it worse.
    Thank you for updating your story

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading and commenting! I agree with everything you've said. I believe that's it's unreasonable to assume these two would immediately get along without argument, so I believe they need to learn to understand each other through these fights to synthesize 2with one another.

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