| Title: Chapter 2: Trouble in Paradise
| 20 Oct 2020 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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OK, hoping I’m making sense of this universe! As Neville is not mentioned I’m presuming he is The Boy For the prophecy’s day he did not make it.
What intrigues me is how did Sirius react to James’ and what happened to him. I’m sure all will be revealed!
Thank you an excellent au
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 20 Oct 2020 10:35 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wow! This is a new story line! Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I hope you enjoy where this is headed!
| Title: Chapter 3: A Whole Different World
| 14 Oct 2020 12:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Yikes! What a delicate position they are all in. Harry being a stubborn teenager is not helping things. Still, I wonder when Harry will find out the truth. Surely that will fix their relationship? Or will it make it worse?
Thanks for writing and sharing! It is good so far and I am enjoying reading it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! I've enjoyed getting to build this universe and there is still so much to unfold.
| Title: Chapter 2: Trouble in Paradise
| 14 Oct 2020 12:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah! Of course Harry is full of self righteous anger. Well done with all the characterizations of the main characters. Snape, Lily, and Harry are wonderfully in character. Well done!
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 14 Oct 2020 12:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Woah! What an interesting premise and start! Good beginning.
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