"...preferably when I am present so I can see the look on his face." 😆 Gotta love your way with Snape's unexpected sense of humor! But what I really relate to in this chapter (as will most readers) is the aftermath/fallout of broken-but-awkwardly-mended relationships. It's so difficult to regain what was previously taken for granted. As for Molly and Sirius... Well, I think Harry needs to have a one-to-one talk with each, sort of like Sirius suggested (despite his appearing to be obliviously dense as to WHY Harry doesn't want to write to him). Molly would understand, if only Harry gave her the opportunity (he's seriously behaving rudely after Molly did apologize) but I still think Sirius might get defensive, and THAT would be an interesting scene to watch play out.
I’m so glad you’ve decided to continue this.
Great start.
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