Aww, this was a heart-warming chapter in so many accounts. I loved the support between our trio and Ginny and I am so glad for the fact that both Poppy and Minerva have affectionate feelings for Severus.
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to show that people care for Snape even if he tries so hard to push people away :’)
Beautiful chapter. I like how you’ve captured the general state of exhaustion everyone is in, and the complexity of everyone’s feelings.
Really good chapter,and its hard to believe that English is not your first language. You have a talent for making your characters come alive, and I love how you are writing Ron -its refreshing to read something that allows his good points to come to the fore.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your words, they mean a lot to me. I have been trying to show Ron how I think he would be by the end of the books: mature and traumatized by the war, but also keeping that sense of humor and loyalty that we all know and love. I hate when people write him as this one-dimensional character that is only there for comedic relief and has no sensitivity whatsoever. It's non believable and an insult to the character, tbh...
Anyway, thank you again for the comment and have a nice day! :)
| Title: At the infirmary
| 20 Oct 2021 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a much better ending to the battle than the feast scene in the book where the dead appeared to be forgotten.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it! I actually felt a bit sad about that in the books: they just sit in there to eat while so many people died and they are kinda not mentioned again. One of the reasons why I started writing this story was that I couldnt stop thinking about that and about Snape's body all alone in the Shrieking Shack and nobody caring about it :( Poor him
Maravilloso capítulo, la espera mereció la pena. Tengo ganas de saber que ocurrirá cuando se despierte.
Author's Response: Gracias por la review, me alegro de que te haya gustado! Subiré el siguiente capítulo en breves :)
Maravilloso capítulo, la espera mereció la pena. Tengo ganas de saber que ocurrirá cuando se despierte.
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