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Reviews For Coming Back Home
Thank you for a lovely long chapter. You are so good at writing natural but clever dialogue and it was a pleasure to read it. I hope all goes well with your move and seeing your family, take care of yourself Author's Response: Thank you for your comment and your words. They mean a lot! I know I say that with every single comment but it is true. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I?m glad you liked it! All the best wishes for you too :)
That was a wonderful chapter! I absolutely love the long and thoughtful conversation between Severus and Harry. The way you wrote Severus slowly opening up to Harry is precious. It's so funny but great to see him struggling with finding the right words when he tries not be his usual snarky and sarcastic self haha. I'm glad Severus talks to Harry and reassures and supports him and says that he's going to support Harry's decision no matter what :). Oh and it's so heartwarming to see how Harry got attached to Severus. Ah, how I love this chapter. I'm sorry about your mother. Please stay safe! I wish you all well <3 Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed comment. I loved it! :) And writing Snape struggling to be nicer it?s really enjoyable. Sometimes it?s hard to find the right words but once I do it?s great to reread those conversations! At the end of the day, I?m grateful that people like my story, but if I keep writing it is cause I enjoy the dynamics between the characters and their evolution. And those conversations between Harry and Snape are my favorites! :D |
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