| Title: Waking up
| 20 Oct 2021 8:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very good meeting between the two. It wasn’t sentimental but they were both in character to an extent but moving forward. Thank you so much for the story
Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review for each chapter, it makes me smile and gives me motivation to keep writing. It's a rare thing nowadays to see somebody that cares about sharing their thoughts with the author, so thank you for that :) And I'm really happy that you liked their first meeting. It's actually what I wanted to show: that they didn't change completely as people and that their relationship didn't get better automatically. But also that they have grown and that they could try to improve their relationship little by little. It's one of my favourite things to see in fanfics, tbh, how they go from hating/not liking each other to being such an important part in each other's lifes. It melts my heart hahah
| Title: At the infirmary
| 20 Oct 2021 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a much better ending to the battle than the feast scene in the book where the dead appeared to be forgotten.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it! I actually felt a bit sad about that in the books: they just sit in there to eat while so many people died and they are kinda not mentioned again. One of the reasons why I started writing this story was that I couldnt stop thinking about that and about Snape's body all alone in the Shrieking Shack and nobody caring about it :( Poor him
This is great!
Author's Response: Im happy you liked it! Thank you for the review :)
Maravilloso capítulo, la espera mereció la pena. Tengo ganas de saber que ocurrirá cuando se despierte.
Author's Response: Gracias por la review, me alegro de que te haya gustado! Subiré el siguiente capítulo en breves :)
Maravilloso capítulo, la espera mereció la pena. Tengo ganas de saber que ocurrirá cuando se despierte.
| Title: Something left to do
| 17 Oct 2021 8:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good start and very good ending. Thank you for starting a promising story
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it and for the review! I hope you enjoy the next chapter :D
Good start
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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