Ooh I have been loving this one. I can’t imagine there are many chapters left though, *cries*, but I am very much looking forward to Harry’s reveal to his friends. You did a great job with this. Tough tough subject matter, but I appreciate that it was never graphic and more was focused on Harry’s PTSD and recovery. Love the manner in which Harry was found. How he cling to Snape with the footsteps. Love love love that it’s McGonagall and Snape teaming up to shadow Harry everywhere and act as his protectors and confidantes. The scenes with him and Ron and Hermione are beautiful, them just being kids feels healing. I’m dying for more!
Dang. Harry's lucky. No one notices shit like that in the system. They just assume you did it to yourself. It's never a possibility that they placed you in a home like that. I never liked lockhart, so I wasn't fazed by his role in this, but it was upsetting to know it happened at Hogwarts. A few spelling/grammar errors, but who doesn't make a mistake every now and then. Over all, great story.
So good! I so hope you continue this!
Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Dec 2021 8:31 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Severus is talking a great deal of sense I hope Harry follows his advice. Thank you for updating
I love Harry’s friends being concerned for him, and running around and playing like children!
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