I absolutely love this story and this chapter in particular. This is the 4th time I’ve read it and it touches my heart every time.
oh my god why did you have to hurt me like that
Author's Response: Sorry, sometimes the sad stories need to be told as well when the idea comes to you. Please be sure to read to the end and the accompanying piece To Turn Back Time which has a better outcome
| Title: Chapter 1
| 20 Feb 2022 8:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good emotional writing, such a sad story but with a lot of comfort, thank you
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it, it's sad but sometimes sad stories can be beautiful and need to be written. i think it originally stemmed from a strange dream I had (I have plenty of them!)
Such a beautiful chapter and story. Very powerful. You have to be in the right mood to read it. Well done.
Author's Response: Apologies, didn't realize I'd not replied until I saw there was a new review. Thank you, I agree and am glad you think so
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