Title: Ch 4 Then he shall tear it by its wings, but shall not sever it.
| 30 May 2022 1:51 pm
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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This is a much better chapter, explaining what is going on, and easier to read.
Using Fawks is a grand idea. Interesting how they transfigured him into a little medallion or tiny plate. I hope their plan works.
Title: Ch 4 Then he shall tear it by its wings, but shall not sever it.
| 24 Apr 2022 12:14 am
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Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Clever plan! I haven’t seen that escape route used before.
Title: Ch 4 Then he shall tear it by its wings, but shall not sever it.
| 17 Apr 2022 8:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Not sure if the crossed out sentences were meant to be deleted or are part of the story, but very effective thank you
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