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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Slytherin Conundrum
Oh no...
I really like your version of Draco. Noisy and acting, but also obsessed with Harry as much as Harry is likely obsessed with him. I like that Draco and Snape have code words for each other when they talk. I wonder who came up with them. The only thing that seemed out of place is that Draco was wearing trainers. I think he wears loafers, Oxfords, or other school shoes with his uniform. Maybe work or dress shoes. Trainers seem so Muggle-ish. But maybe they are trainers and I don't know. Fantastic chapter. Great pace. Compelling emotions. Thanks for writing and sharing this! |
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