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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Slytherin Conundrum
Poor Draco thought it was his fault. I love that they decided NOT to tell Dumbledore. Poor Sirius and Remus though, they are going to feel so guilty when they find out the extent of Harry's condition and where and when it happened. I'm loving your Snape, Draco and Poppy. McGonagall is very in character. I think the only thing I noticed that could use some improvement is some more physical descriptions of Poppy and McGonagall, and maybe Sirius if he has improved from being at St Mungoes. I had trouble visualizing them. Everyone else especially Harry had a fantastic level of detail and was easy to visualize. I am really enjoying this story so far! The hint about the appearance charm at 6 months is inspired. I hope they keep Harry in the hospital wing until he is better, or find a way to check up on him in a way Dumbledore won't notice. I'm sure the portraits saw Snape carrying Harry to the infirmary. I bet they might inform Dumbledore. Maybe Snape has a scar-reducing potion he can offer Harry later? I loved this chapter. Thanks so much for writing and sharing! Please update when you can. :) |
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