Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 23 Oct 2023 2:21 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was quite an opening chapter! It was nicely paced and has me hooked.
Title: Chapter 4 23 Oct 2023 10:27 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice read so far! Looking forward to more.

    I'm surprised though that Snape wasn't fully informed of Harry's treatment at his relatives before being awarded guardianship... It seems to me that would have been necessary! Hopefully he doesn't cause Harry to much heartache... At least for long.
Title: Chapter 4 22 Oct 2023 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Melibelly (Signed) [Report This]
    I am hooked! You have such great characterizations. All the characters just feel real and are reacting in ways that suit them.

    I am interested to see Draco's reaction when he learns that his mom knows where he is. I hope that he is able to see his parents soon and get some kind of reassurance. Ted seems like such a sweet guy, i'm not looking forward to his heart being broken by Draco's cruel words.

    It seems like everyone was so focused on protecting Harry that they forgot that he also needs love and support. I'm excited to see Snape's growth toward being a caring guardian. Poor kid must be terrified that Snape is going to be punishing him worse than the Dursleys, without even school being an escape anymore.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 4 21 Oct 2023 7:45 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    After those statements, no social worker worth her salt would feel like Severus is in Harry’s best interests. So far I’m enjoying this story a lot. Maybe Snape needs some photos of Harry’s abused body. Charity’s sarcastic comments about Dudley didn’t help Snape believe. Cold facts and evidence might help. I’m surprised that charity didn’t meet with him before hand to explain what happened to Harry and go over his file with Snape. That would be standard practice.
Title: Chapter 4 21 Oct 2023 2:40 am
Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed) [Report This]

    Nice depiction of the feelings of boys being torn from what they know to an unknown and possibly hostile situation.  

Title: Chapter 4 20 Oct 2023 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, I hate the ministry! They can make decisions that sent red flags but go home content at doing a good deed!

    Honestly, I love Severitus, but I don't see how anyone in that world can agree that Severus will be a good guardian, especially when he even refuses to see the abuse!

    Also, uh,sorry for the rant lol. Brilliantly written story, evidenced by the 'feels' you've stirred up in me.
Title: Chapter 3 20 Oct 2023 1:21 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm feeling so sorry for Draco!

    Of course, it's nit really terrible, but it must seem like that to him. And his parents may be evil, but not to him.
Title: Chapter 2 20 Oct 2023 1:12 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh! What a blow for Harry! I hope Severus comes around!

    Lol, Andy manipulated Ted brilliantly! Still, it seems like Draco will have trouble adjusting, especially as Andy and Dora are not exactly thrilled to be taking him on
Title: Chapter 1 20 Oct 2023 12:42 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is intriguing! And I especially love how you got Dracon in custody.
Title: Chapter 1 20 Oct 2023 12:42 pm
Reviewer: Binte Muhammad (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is intriguing! And I especially love how you got Dracon in custody.

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