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Reviews For Resonance
Title: The Offer 03 Dec 2023 3:10 am
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    A great chapter. The bit about the pillow only comfortable to monk from strict order is the wit I love about this story. It's one of many quotes always remembered.
Title: The Offer 02 Dec 2023 2:03 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was lovely. You’ve somehow made that whole exchange feel meaningful and natural.
Title: The Offer 29 Nov 2023 2:15 am
Reviewer: Reticulated (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story so far! I'm finding it well written and well developed.
    Just a question - wouldn't the toilets be inside the tower?

    Author's Response:

    That's a good question. Back in 2005 one couldn't just ask AI powered google such things. So, my over-read about medieval castles brain was thinking that originally Hogwarts would have had an overhanging outdoor affair, at best, and most everyone would have used chamber pots emptied by the maid. So bathrooms would have been added much later as an afterthought, and since any bathroom would have been a wild luxury at that time, given the alternative was an outhouse or a chamber pot, having them anywhere inside would have been amazing. So they would have been positioned where the effluence could be easily piped to the moat (in this case, the lake). So, I was thinking, not in the common area of the house. Same problem by the way for the dungeons. Below lake level, no way to get the waste to flow to the lake, so those common rooms wouldn't either. I mean, other than magic. ;-) But architecturally, the castle seems like an ordinary castle.

    I'm sure I overthought it. But that was the thinking. 

Title: The Offer 28 Nov 2023 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Not sure Severus sold the idea in the right way but definitely in a Severus way. I have so enjoyed reading through this story so far thank you so much



    Author's Response:

    The feedback is welcome here. this section got rewritten to reflect more what I expected was going in in Snape's head. So, I wasn't sure how it was going to read.


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