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Title: Silent, Steadfast, and Forbearing 10 Apr 2024 11:09 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    The Auror trials were fascinating. I had never really thought of how they would go, and this was intriguing. Thanks for another wonderful chapter.
Title: Silent, Steadfast, and Forbearing 15 Mar 2024 3:54 am
Reviewer: hobesan (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting way of assessment. The part with Nagini was my favorite.
    "Harry kept looking at his parent" was this changed from "guardian". I don't see your Harry mentally referring to Snape as his parent. Severus, Dad or even father but parent is used a lot. Was it to make a changed feeling in the relationship? It never reads " Severus looked at his son or child"
    I was just curious as it feels different from previous times reading this.

    Author's Response:

    I started shifting Harry's perception to try it on for size, since in the previous version, like you are remembering, it was just guardian all the way down. I was thinking there'd be an evolution and then a switch to "parent" but on a re-read I'm not sure now. You'd think it wouldn't be so hard to pick a lane on this, but there are moments, like the one you mention of higher emotion, where I left a few of them in when I was re-re-editing. 

Title: Silent, Steadfast, and Forbearing 14 Mar 2024 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you an interesting chapter and very inventive with the testing



    Author's Response:

    Only a little playing to Harry's strengths...


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