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Reviews For Resonance
"Harry kept looking at his parent" was this changed from "guardian". I don't see your Harry mentally referring to Snape as his parent. Severus, Dad or even father but parent is used a lot. Was it to make a changed feeling in the relationship? It never reads " Severus looked at his son or child" I was just curious as it feels different from previous times reading this. Author's Response: I started shifting Harry's perception to try it on for size, since in the previous version, like you are remembering, it was just guardian all the way down. I was thinking there'd be an evolution and then a switch to "parent" but on a re-read I'm not sure now. You'd think it wouldn't be so hard to pick a lane on this, but there are moments, like the one you mention of higher emotion, where I left a few of them in when I was re-re-editing.
Thank you an interesting chapter and very inventive with the testing Author's Response: Only a little playing to Harry's strengths... |
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