| Title: Breakdown
| 16 Feb 2005 2:06 am
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| Reviewer: Juventas (Anonymous)
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This was a great continuation of the events in Contrariwise...
How Hermione saw Harry not even attempt to wipe a tear running down his face and her, Ron and Ginny's reaction to not being able to run to him and comfort him... not being able to make sure he was alright.
I loved how Harry clinged to Remus, like He unconsiously knew who he was... that he was safe with him.
I can't wait for more!
Do we get to see Gordon talk to everyone in the kitchen next?
I really don't understand what's going on.. Harry got punished and had to read lines from a book...but then what happened...he just freaked out?
Author's Response: Remember, Lies!Harry is actually empathic. The adults did not expect him to get out of control and started panicking, which only set Harry off. Also, Harry doesn't like being trapped, and he most definitely was. Both of these things led to him having a breakdown, which is why Gordon needed to help him get back to a state where he could communicate.. does that help?
| Title: Breakdown
| 16 Feb 2005 1:25 am
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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I so love this story, lots of interesting things going on. Very eager for some more chapters
| Title: Breakdown
| 16 Feb 2005 1:08 am
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| Reviewer: ckat44 (Anonymous)
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I love this chapter. It is probably my favorite. It is SO PERFECTLY ANGSTY! I can't pick just one moment. I don't have any negative critism for it either. CONTRARIWISE! I really like how Gordon dealt with him and I look forward to conversations to come! I LOVE ANGST! I am always dissapointed by angsty stories. I always want them to be a certain way and feel sometimes if i want them a certain way the only thing i can do is write them myself...not that im the best writer in the world. This story is different though. It is written perfectly and exceeds expectations!
| Title: Breakdown
| 15 Feb 2005 9:32 pm
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| Reviewer: rosiegirl (Anonymous)
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Yah, you updated!!!!!! Thanks so much!! Good chapter, can't wait for the next one. Will we find out more soon?
Author's Response: The Magic 8 Ball (also known as the author) says: Time will tell. ;-) Actually, yes, you will find out more soon, never fear. :-D
SQUEEEEEE!! I feel like my birthday and Christmas have both come together!!! THANK YOU! This chapter was everything I hoped it would be!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you *so* much. :-D "Everything you hoped it would be" is such great confirmation--I have wrestled over this chapter for months (literally) and it was because I felt it was such an essential chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I'll try to make sure you don't have to wait long for more! :-D
| Title: Breakdown
| 15 Feb 2005 8:54 am
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| Reviewer: morgan (Anonymous)
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Wow. Haven't seen THIS story in a while...it's nice to read it again, though. I hope you update soon.
| Title: Breakdown
| 15 Feb 2005 8:38 am
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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