| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Feb 2005 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Chimes Fergusson (Anonymous)
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Hey, I love your story! I was just wondering (and I dont know if you've already mentioned this) but when is Snape going to enter the story again?
Author's Response: He's on his way back in, imminently. Never fear, he is an important character in the fic. ;-)
| Title: Breakdown
| 22 Feb 2005 12:17 am
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| Reviewer: Asitha (Anonymous)
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When I first started reading this story I didn't think that I would like it. I thought that it would be overly dramatic and just plain stupid, but as I read I found myself failing to be able to walk away from it. I'm quite curious as to when there will be more Severus/Harry interaction. Please continue soon!
Hi!!!... Wow, it has been a lot since the last time you update. I was starting to think you have abandon the fic, so I was really happy when I found an autor alert in my mail telling me you had post a new chapter.
What can I said about it. It was really good. A pity snape wasn't in it. I was wondering, when will snape and harry know about their relationship. or at least when will they talk! or shout!... anything to show they know the other is alive.
Maybe when severus start to talk to harry suddenly all his problems will go away. (I know that's supid, in fact, it won't be very like harry that)...
Anyway, I hope you update sooner than the last time, and to see some interaction between you know who in the next chaper, or the chapter after that.
Well that's all, bye
Connie Eressëa
Miembro de la orden Sirusiana
Miembro de la orden Severusiana
Miembro de la orden Draconiana
| Title: Breakdown
| 21 Feb 2005 2:09 am
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| Reviewer: Gray Darken (Anonymous)
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Wow. That last chapter was very... emotional. It had been obvious that Harry would break down, but I had not realized how intense you would write it... But it was absolutly amazing how you did. It makes my heart ache, knowing that this happened to him... Thank you for writing this... I shall be looking for more soon. ^o^
| Title: Breakdown
| 20 Feb 2005 3:17 am
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| Reviewer: Shelby (Anonymous)
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really good chapter can't wait for the next one :)
| Title: Breakdown
| 20 Feb 2005 1:09 am
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| Reviewer: Zigflorian (Anonymous)
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Love the fic! When are Snape and Harry going to have more interaction? And when is the whole 'snape is harry's father' thing going to come into play? Anyway Just wanted to tell you it is great, keep on writing!
hi, this is BlackRaven13 following you from ff.net. Yay, an update! i loved that last part with the quotes and the book, and i also love the therapist. Harry definitely needs a therapist. when is Severus going to come into the story more? hope you update soon!
| Title: Breakdown
| 19 Feb 2005 7:18 pm
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| Reviewer: hpfreakout (Anonymous)
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great chapter, very interesting. poor harry, cant wait to read more. Write more soon/
| Title: Breakdown
| 19 Feb 2005 7:41 am
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| Reviewer: Maia (Anonymous)
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Oh, darling this chappie had me in tears (which is funny cause I had Finding Nemo on the TV while I was reading it and that's definately not a crying movie). It was so gorgeous and you had everyone portrayed beautifully. So totally worth the wait.
I really love your Harry, how angry and confused and vulnerable he is. I love that you've given him power, but you haven't made him all powerful, that you've had him be abused, but you haven't over done it. Everything is just in a nice balance, I hope that continues.
Your story is gorgeous, and I can't wait for the next part.
| Title: Breakdown
| 19 Feb 2005 6:56 am
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| Reviewer: Alynna (Anonymous)
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Wow. Very cool. I don't suppose you're going to start in on the Severitus aspect of this soon? I'm really looking forward to that.
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