Technically, shouldnt Vernon's screams have woken Harry up? The blood wards if they let a snake in could have let Voldys corporeal form in too... A little plot hole that is not gone about well.
Oh Man, Thank Merlin They're Out Of There. & I'm Really Hoping That Snape Killed Lucius. That Blonds Barbie Bastard Deserves A Painful Death, But One At The Wand Of Severus Snape Will Do Just Nicely.
& Poor Harry, He's So Terrified Because He Can't See. The Poor Boy.
Can't Wait For More! Please Update Soon!
Uh Oh, This Is NOT Good. Poor Harry, He's Blinded & Now He's Running For His Life In A Forest Of Some Kind.
Oh & Snape's All Fucked Up, Probably Got A Broken Leg & Either A Punctured Lung Or Internal Bleeding, Either Way, He's Definitely In No Condition To Fight Lucius, Not Good. Though I Really Hope He Kills Lucius.
Well, That's Horrible & All... Sorry, I'm PRetty Happy That Whale Of A Human Is Finally Dead. If It Weren't For The Fact That Harry Was Kidnapped, I'm Be Bouncing With Joy!
Wonderful chapter, I loved the interaction between Harry and Poppy (one of my favourite characters).
Well written, interesting chapter. I liked the Harry/Snape interaction and your depition of their personalities.
Great chapter; very gritty, tense and vivid. You've hinted at various events without quite revealing the answers, a technique which grabs a reader's attention and inflames their curiousity. Well done
Brilliant chapter. I really liked your use of imagery and your depiction of Voldemort's home; the faded opulence seems very fitting for a man who has destroyed himself in pursuit of greatness.
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