Uh Oh, This Is NOT Good. Poor Harry, He's Blinded & Now He's Running For His Life In A Forest Of Some Kind.
Oh & Snape's All Fucked Up, Probably Got A Broken Leg & Either A Punctured Lung Or Internal Bleeding, Either Way, He's Definitely In No Condition To Fight Lucius, Not Good. Though I Really Hope He Kills Lucius.
Great chapter; very gritty, tense and vivid. You've hinted at various events without quite revealing the answers, a technique which grabs a reader's attention and inflames their curiousity. Well done
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