Great chapter; I love your writing style, it's very atmospheric, and the plot of this chapter kept me on the edge of my seat.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 27 May 2007 5:28 am
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| Reviewer: swaggy1 (Anonymous)
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You're a great writer.I love it.
Very interesting story so far! :)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 30 Apr 2006 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: 1derland pixie (Anonymous)
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wow! Poor Harry! I hope the blinding thing didn't work, but I have a feeling it did! Please update again really soon! This story is so good!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Apr 2006 7:07 am
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| Reviewer: 1derland pixie (Anonymous)
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ohhh! this sounds so interesting! But how could Harry sleep through his uncle sleeping! That is magc right there!
By the way, I think that you may want to change your summary a little. It does nothing to show how great this story started, and the summary isn't what has happened in the story yet. That may be why not as many people have given the story a try- I was very pleasently and wonderfully surprised to read it and when I went back to read the summary it seemed like a completely different story.
OH NO!!! Poor Harry! Wow, this chapter is wonderful, great writing and great movement. But poor, poor Harry. You painted a chilling scene in this chapter and Voldemort was a carefully constructed, incharacter villian. Wonderful, wonderful job on him! I was quite wrapped up in the story telling. I did catch that his "Death Eaters" could find the place though, does that mean that Dumbledore will send Snape? Oh wow, I can't wait to see what little machinations Voldemort will try, and the humanity in all the characters - Harry, Snape and Dumbledore. Great job so far! Please write more!
Ouuu... what a beginning! Harry is kidnapped in the dead of the night. You don't see him taken so easily usually. Nice change. :)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 15 May 2005 11:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Hmm, very interesting begining, curious as to where yoiu plan to go from here
| Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Mar 2005 5:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Interesting start, looking forward to more
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