| Title: An Unexpected Warning
| 10 Sep 2006 3:35 am
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| Reviewer: Lady galenda (Anonymous)
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An enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)
So I'm rereading your story... I thought I ought to leave some good reviews for each of the chapters. I doubt I did that my first time through. Well I can imagine the first time you posted this chapter (was it the only one at the time?) It must have driven everyone crazy, with that warning from Draco! Well anyway, I really like your word choice. You use a bunch of different, colorful words to describe things... Eh, I don't know if that makes sense...but it was something I've noticed throughout your whole story. I really like how you've set up Harry's mindset. He's still angry/grieving, but he wants to improve himself and focus on killing Voldemort- it's like he's really growing up. That makes me sad to think about Harry in book one, the little eleven year old all excited about magic...
Author's Response: Well, first of all, thank you for doing that! I really do appreciate the feedback- I haven't gotten much on this site, for all that I've recieved on fanfiction.net. Yes, this chapter was rather... I'm not sure how to describe it, but having people comment on how out of character it seemed and stuff like that irritated me... because you don't get the gist of it all until later. No, I didn't post only this chapter at first- I posted the first 5, simply because I personally hate when people post one chapter of a story to start. Also, I like to develop things... so I knew the next few chapters were going to be kind of slow, and I didn't want people to get bored.
| Title: An Unexpected Warning
| 09 Sep 2006 9:58 am
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| Reviewer: (visitor) (Anonymous)
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I can not wait for your next update! I just read this story all the way through and love it. Your writing is wonderful!
Author's Response: I won't lie, I can't wait for my next update either! Haha, I've been working hard on it, I really have. With the start of school it's been rather difficult, I won't lie... still, the ideas are flowing and my fingers are moving quickly. With any luck, we'll see an update soon.
| Title: An Unexpected Warning
| 30 Jun 2006 12:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Snarky Bitch (Anonymous)
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Good story so far. Write mor. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
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