I like the story. Allthough I'm not to fond of CP, your version of it doesn't seem that bad, so it's ok I guess:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

Bye for now:) 

Dear Dina,

I read your story almost from the beginning, but I didn't review, beceuse of my poor language skills, but I couldn't stop myself from writing now. Your story is beautiful writen, situations are so natural, that sometimes I think, that maybe one day I will meet Severus or Harry ( I know, I'm little mental :D ). I like the way you create characters, some of them are out of character, but they are so realistic, that I can't be unhappy about it. I really like the relationship between Severus and Harry, and I am happy for them, that they can have each other, even if only for short time. It's sad, that Rowling haven't done their relationship more neutral, I wish they could like each other (I know I wish impossible things, but everyone can wish something, right? ).Your updates are going slowly, but I know you have other things to do, so I don't mind as long as you would update it and don't end it in the middle. I reread your story few times, so I practically know it by heart. I just wanted to congratulate you your writing skills. If I could write like you... well, nevermind. I hope that next chapter will be sooner than the last, so I cross my fingers. Thank you for your writing, you made me happy when I have no reason to be more than sad.

I hope that you understood something from my babbling ;-)

I really liked this chapter, especially Snape's realization of what he'd said to Dumbledore.  His reactions to Dumbledore sound very much like some grown child and parent disagreements where the "child" doesn't truly want to end the relationship, but is so angry or distressed over a situation that he says things from which it's very difficult to retreat. 

I hope you keep this story going.  I imagine you've got lots of development to do in order to keep going once the next school year starts, but it  seems to have so many great possibilities.  Don't worry too much about the length of time to post, as long as you keep your muse alive.