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Reviews For The Painful Guardianship
I really liked this chapter, especially Snape's realization of what he'd said to Dumbledore. His reactions to Dumbledore sound very much like some grown child and parent disagreements where the "child" doesn't truly want to end the relationship, but is so angry or distressed over a situation that he says things from which it's very difficult to retreat.
I hope you keep this story going. I imagine you've got lots of development to do in order to keep going once the next school year starts, but it seems to have so many great possibilities. Don't worry too much about the length of time to post, as long as you keep your muse alive.
I loved it. Especially when Harry got his answer about his thing being big. LOL classic. I hope you decide to continue this story into current times. It'd be ashame to end it anywhere for that matter.
Please keep up the good work..and don't worry about posting. My stories have lacked posting for a shamefully long time because of RL.
“Daddy? When I was taking the bath, I found my thing looking so big. Is that bad?” LOL!!!!!!!!!!
ROTFL!!! I loved that last line.....I am almost wetting myself. Too funy. Bravo! It needed to end on a light note and it did. Update again soon. Please.
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