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Title: Chapter 25 - Back 17 Jul 2006 12:44 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a very intense update!  The story is coming along nicely: complex and well plotted.  I thought letting Snape blow off steam like that to Dumbledore was very telling, also very realistic!  You may not update often, but quality takes time.  Thank you for continuing your story!!!!  When it's finished, I'd love to print out a hard copy to reread when I can't get near a computer!
Title: Chapter 25 - Back 14 Jul 2006 9:50 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]

    I really liked this chapter, especially Snape's realization of what he'd said to Dumbledore.  His reactions to Dumbledore sound very much like some grown child and parent disagreements where the "child" doesn't truly want to end the relationship, but is so angry or distressed over a situation that he says things from which it's very difficult to retreat. 

     

    I hope you keep this story going.  I imagine you've got lots of development to do in order to keep going once the next school year starts, but it  seems to have so many great possibilities.  Don't worry too much about the length of time to post, as long as you keep your muse alive.

Title: Chapter 25 - Back 14 Jul 2006 8:54 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    I loved it.  Especially when Harry got his answer about his thing being big. LOL classic.  I hope you decide to continue this story into current times. It'd be ashame to end it anywhere for that matter.

     

    Please keep up the good work..and don't worry about posting. My stories have lacked posting for a shamefully long time because of RL. 

Title: Chapter 25 - Back 14 Jul 2006 5:51 pm
Reviewer: Arualcopia (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this is a great new chapter. Four year old Harry is really funny! I like how you added in Snape's realization of how he threw out Dumbledore- and felt guilty for it. Are you going to include a little 'chat' between the two of them? Anyway, great chapter, I look forward to an update.
Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 21 Jun 2006 3:22 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just reread the last few chapters hoping there was an update.  I really like this story.  That ending was priceless.
Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 10 Jun 2006 8:51 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]

     “Daddy?  When I was taking the bath, I found my thing looking so big.  Is that bad?”
    “Er ...!”
     

    LOL!!!!!!!!!!

Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 07 Jun 2006 4:52 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hahahahahahahaha, you certainly know where to stop. I hardly can wait for Severus to explain is 'it' normal, lol.  And really, if your apology isn't enough to reconsile  a long delay then your perfect chapter certainly does it! That was a really fantastic chapter! I always love de-aging Harry no matter  what kind kid Harry does in that fic. Now, please update again soon, I cannot wait to see Severus explaining 'it' to Harry!
Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 06 Jun 2006 4:15 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just finished the chapters I skipped yesterday to finish the end (so I could FINALLY go to sleep).  I'm hooked!!!  Whoever said there was no action in your story is bonkers.  There is plenty of action--it's just the emotional kind.  Sometimes slow, others--very fast.  But always moving forward!!!!  They have found what the other most craved and have given it to each other unstintingly.  It's so warm and fluffy to see.  This last chapter was extremely dramatic!   Snape is willing to forgo all previous comittments in favor of fostering Harry.  How wonderful that someone is finally willing to put Harry's emotional needs first!  I agree that he's kind of childish, but as you pointed out, this is the first time Harry has been allowed, no required, to be the child he's always wanted to be.  After all, 12-13 years of emotional starvation does not a healthy, happy child make.  I'm a new and very excited reader.  Don't worry about RL getting in your way of updating.  I'd rather good stuff I had to wait for than no waiting for 'poopies'.  Ha, Ha!!!
Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 04 Jun 2006 5:26 am
Reviewer: sweets2 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    ROTFL!!! I loved that last line.....I am almost wetting myself. Too funy.  Bravo! It needed to end on a light note and it did. Update again soon. Please.

Title: Chapter 24 - Oh My! 01 Jun 2006 3:12 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    hahaha that was cute! It was written very well also.  waiting for more. :D

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