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Call me: Mara (MJ) (female) Member since: 24 Jun 2009
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LOOKING FOR A BETA?  Please, please, PLEASE send me a message.  I am actively looking for people to beta for.  I would love to beta for you!  BUT - plesae read below on what sort of a beta I am before throwing stories at me.

I love betaing and always prefer reading betaed fics.  I think it should be a no-brainer and a must-have for any work, fanfiction or otherwise; all good work must have editing and revision done.  Let me tell you, I was appalled to see a few Polls ago that 46% of writers don't beta their work - and another 25% do so only if required by a ficfest.  How depressing.  It's the mark of a good writer that cares for both their work, as well as their readers, that will make sure to have at least one other set of eyes check their writing before posting to the masses.

Depending on what type of fic yours is, I would be more than happy to beta for you.  Not that I really have a problem betaing anything (I will literally take anything, nothing is too __[fill in adjective]____ for me) but there are genres and types that I prefer over others.  Things will go much more smoothly if we both get along and I'm as excited about your story as you are.  I am the type of beta that not only does typographical checks, but gives constructive criticism on word choice, plot and character development, and problems in how the story itself is written.

I'm an interesting person (if I do say so myself) who tends to be quiet and reserved when I need to or when observing, but get me alone and relaxed with you and you may be in for a surprise! I love animals of all types and hope to go on in the animal industry in the public relations/communications area, while writing my own stories on the side. Maybe one day I'll even have my own books published!  I am an English Writing major heading into my senior year and Comprehensive at university with a Biology minor.  Wish me luck on the comp - I get to write an entire novel!  I was in 4-H Rabbits for 8 years, and continue to compete on the national show circuit where I am now known nation-wide for my excellent stock.  For two years I worked at as a stable hand during the school year, which I loved.  Someday I plan to have my own breeding stables.

I also LOVE the Spanish language and culture - actually all foreign stuff, really - and can't wait to study abroad! Music is a huge passion in my life and that of my family - I sing, act, play all string instuments but mainly violin, and play piano. I hope to learn formal dancing soon too. Manga, FanFiction, creative writing, photography, Howrse (virtual horse game), theater, and reading fantasy and sci-fi are my current wastes-too-much-time activities. ;)

My faults?....Bossy, good at lying, stubborn, extremely bullheaded at times, dysfunctional family, brutally honest, sly and underhanded to get what I want often times, severe tunnel vision - what I call my 'phases' - at times, and apparently I have not been 'cultured' yet - says my AP English class. In other words, basically a normal human being! Or as normal as anyone can get, anyway.

Like many with the stereotypical stigma against the house, for years I did not wish to consider myself as a Slytherin.  I aimed instead to be a much more uprighteous Ravenclaw.  Recently, however, the more I read FanFiction and the HP books over and over again, the more I thought about it....and I realized that I truly am a Slytherin at heart.  I am EXTREMELY ambitious, and very cunning and sly.  And people wonder why I make such a good fundraiser... ;)  Now I proudly wear my elegant, beautiful Slytherin crest on my sleeve for everyone to see.  (Courtesy of Harry Potter: The Exhibition.  Yay!)  Plus I absolutely LOVE the colors green and silver together - even before HP - and have always been fascinated by snakes.  Ah, Slytherin to a T, eh?

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Summary:
Soon after he arrives back at school for fifth or sixth year, Harry has an accident somehow transports him into our world in the current year in Muggle America. And who should have tagged along but his least two favorite people - Snape and Draco? As if that's not enough, it turns out that this world is actually an alternate reality from their own, one in which the Harry Potter story is a series of books that have revolutionized our world and culture.

While trying to find a way home, they learn to each reconcile with each other and come to realize that their perspective on each was skewed. Bonding occurs - fatherly/brotherly or otherwise. Throughout it all, they must try to keep low profiles and survive in a world that can instantly recognize them as story-book characters. For if that little fact leaks out, mass chaos would ensue.

In this world, they are recognized by a young girl/boy around Harry and Draco's age (OC) who ends up befriending them and helping them throughout their journey.

Please try to make reactions of all characters and especially the OC as realistic as possible. (i.e. if you literally ran into your favorite story-book character on the street, what would you really do?)

Ideas:
  • Angst, drama, humor, hurt/comfort
  • Girl is in school (high school or uni)
  • Harry has unresolved issues with Cedric's and Sirius' deaths, which are confronted
  • Draco has unresolved home life issues that are confronted
  • Scenes with loads of humor. Use your imagination - it's a perfect setting. ;)
  • Harry and Draco attend public Muggle school with the girl, and Snape gets a job of some sort - most likely a teaching position (substitute or long-term)
  • They are trapped in this world for quite some time. Long enough to experience some of our major holidays, at least.
  • Harry has nightmares
  • Harry has unresolved Dursley issues which are confronted
  • OC understands the Snape/Harry and Harry/Draco discord and works to try and fix it
  • OC has no problem sharing her opinions with Snape, especially when s/he butts heads with him. This happening somewhat often, and rather loudly too would be awesome! :D

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