Do with it what you will, but there are bonus points if:
- Harry agrees (to save Severus, if nothing else) then promptly gets caught up in Death Eater subculture. The Light almost loses him. Almost.
- The fic is chaptered and the relationship between Snape and Harry is properly explained.
- Severus brings concern for Harry to Dumbledore's attention, who waves them off as acting skills. This would be fine, if someone hadn't overheard them..
- The Dursleys die. And Pettigrew. Preferably a brutal death, but Harry's degree of savagery is up to you.
- It takes place either post/during-OotP or post/during-HBP
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