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Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Devleoping Connections
| 09 Apr 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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My goodness, this is one amazing story!!! Few lines will not be enough to describe how good it is !!! This story is truly magical... # spoilers please be aware I'll be talking about some important parts in this story that may ruin your experience if you did not yet read it.
I normally hate reading biological father Snape because it usually involves infidelity which makes Lily look bad, and although I was worried at the start you proved me wrong.
I’ll start with writing. Your writing is very smooth, beautifully descriptive, and strong throughout. I like how you tackled some concepts that can be hard to justify or explain, and authors usually avoid. For example, Tevin lived under Dumbledore’s nose but was not yet discovered, your solution was simple yet effective; changing his eye colors (even though this broke my heart) (we've seen it done before in the sixth book when Hermoine changes Harry's eyebrow color) as well as changing his name and introducing Ophelia as his pseudo mother truly conceals his Identity! The characters in this story were also amazing, true to their canon characterization given this AU, and very complex... You also know how to develop a character! I was especially fond of your build-up of Remus and the Malfoys ( I always thought these characters had huge potential that was wasted in the novel). and your original characters were also very amazing. I love every one of them! The friendship between the Malfoys and Snapes was heartwarming and endearing, they accept their differences and work with them… you address some important problems while being realistic about it. the friendship between Harry and Draco is just beautiful.
I really wish you’d consider finishing this phenomenal piece and hopefully follow it with another installment… there are many questions that are yet to be answered .. and I really want to see more of these characters' adventures. Please consider updating this again… I’ll looking forward to it.! P.s. if you have any original work please let us know … I’ll look forward to reading it. Sorry I keep editing my review, I just can’t stop thinking of this story, and whenever I reread what I write I feel it’s inadequate XD.
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Strengthened Bonds
| 15 Apr 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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This chapter is one of my favorites!! I love how you write Tevin and Draco at this age, they are adorable… and it makes sense that Tevin would be the more responsible of the two. Severus is such a good father ôvô (A far cry from his own father). I totally understand what Lucius has been through, when you see your child doing stupidly frightening things you become so afraid for them that it turns into anger…
Harry woke up surrounded by darkness with no recollection of the past events - only to find himself in the care of somebody he would have least expected. One question remains: WHY?
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Neglect, Self-harm
Chapters: 4
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 Sep 2009 / 22 Aug 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 28 Sep 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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Oh noo, this is such a great start !! Really wish you would continue this
A worried, preoccupied Harry finds an apt distraction in an impromptu animal rescue mission. Unfortunately for him, it does not go quite the way he planned. In fact, it goes very wrong.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 30 Sep 2009 / 30 Sep 2009
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Rescue
| 13 Nov 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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aaaWwww how cute, that was sweet.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 04 Oct 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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Oh no this looks really exciting… I wish you would complete it
Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue
| 23 Mar 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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I loooved this…. Such an amazing work …. I usually like that Harry participates in the tournament (the 4th book is the best in my opinion ). I don’t how you managed to make it enjoyable all the while taking a complete way around it!! I’m so impressed!
Title: Chapter 1: On a Snowy Evening
| 05 Oct 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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I felt really sad when harry found out that loneliness will no go away even if you grow up…. Great story hope you continue to write more
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Swansong
| 25 Oct 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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Uugh this hurts deeply !!!
What a wonderful story both hopeful and sad. I wish that Severus would've ignored Dumbledore and taken harry with him T.T..now I'm crying
Thank you for this beguiling story
Harry's been sorted into Slytherin, and Snape is forced to see things he would rather not. And what does an old box from a long time friend have to do with anything? Entrant in the 2011 Fic Exchange. Written for autumnamberleaves.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Fic Fests > #13 Fic Exchange 2011
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Feb 2011 / 20 Feb 2011
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Of Ink and Parchment
| 20 Oct 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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How CUTE!! Wish you would consider expanding on this, Love how your Lupin is perfectly sarcastic... And his relationship with severus seems beautiful and elastic.
And I love, love, LOVE Harry and Draco's friendship
Title: Chapter 7: To Witches and Wizards and Magical Feasts
| 23 Oct 2022
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Reviewer: Wejee (Signed)
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This was just so sweet and fulfilling that I actually cried in the last paragraph…. I loved it from the it’s first word to it’s last.
Thank you very much… And I wish you would consider a sequel to this fabulous story.
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