Unsorted!
With a strange potion, new location and the odd Muggle Studies Professor along for the ride, Harry's in for an interesting summer, but why is Snape here? Dumbledore had better pray he gets all three back in one piece! Humor, Angst, No Mary Sues, No Romance, no real plot.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Injured!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by carrie
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jul 2016 / 15 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: In Which Bad Choices Are Made | 24 Jan 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- This was great! I don't know what you still need to change, but I loved it! I'm so glad Harry finally tried to get his wand back, even though he wasn't sucessful. That confrontation with Snape was marvelous! "Tan your hide", I lol so hard at that. That would be funny if Snape really did that. Poor Harry, couldn't even eat his favorite cereal. Can't wait to see how occlumency lessons go.
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! Are you the same Carrie on my group? Thanks so much for the multiple reviews. :)
Yeah, I know that the chapter is ok but I am just a perfectionist and I can't help thinking that everything has some big fatal mistake because I put the wrong twist of emotion here or Harry is too crybabyish here, ect ect. Haha why was the "tan your hide" line funny? If I were Harry I would be terrified! I actually hope that Harry doesn't try to go through Snape's room again because Snape doesn't seem the type to give empty threats. And Snape is just a git- taking Harry's cereal away! Rah!!! (Haha I can't wait until Snape tries some later on...)
| Title: Chapter 13: In Which Bad Choices Are Made | 24 Jan 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Sorry, just had to add UPDATE soon please!
Author's Response: :P LOL. I'm trying, I'm trying! But you know what? You singularly put me in a GREAT mood to write today. Thanks!
Haha, but the bad thing is that I don't want to post to FFN cause I don't want to have to think about what a million reviews say cause they might take me out of my mood. Hmmm...
| Title: Chapter 14: Meditation with Snape | 11 Mar 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Hey! Another great chapter! I like the lesson with Harry and Snape. That was great. Seems like Hoppity is starting to piece together some of Harry's past. I hope she and Snape figure it out soon! I am so enjoying this! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, she has been getting suspicions. I can't wait to piece everything together, but it will be an outside help that will first bring it to their knowledge.
| Title: Chapter 15: Who Hurt Him? | 06 Jun 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Yes! An update! You are awesome! I knew someone would find out about Harry soon, and the soccer thing was a great way for someone to find out.
It's nice to see Snape care in his own weird way. I wonder what he will do now with this knowledge?
Cant' wait for the next update! Great job!
Author's Response: Yay! *hugs you* Thanks for the review! I'll do my best!
| Title: Chapter 16: Dinosaur Chess | 12 Jul 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Alright! Another posting! Awesome. I really liked the dinosaur game with Snape. That was so cute! Snape kind of got into it. Maybe he's starting to soften just a bit. Great job! I look forward to the next update!
Author's Response: hehe thank you! Yeah I know what you mean. He kind of got into it but not really. *sigh* Will he ever lighten up? Thanks for leaving me feedback. :D
| Title: Chapter 17: Let's Play a Game | 28 Sep 2005 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Cool, an update. I think I read part of this before, so I guess you added to it? Anyway, great job. Would have liked to have seen a bit more Snape/Harry, but I liked what was there.
Can't wait for more soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I posted the first scene like a month ago. This part of the story was really hard, i would have liked to see more Snape and Harry interaction as well but what I had written down earlier.. it was just a muddle through and I just needed to get through it so that I can get into my stride of how the rest of the story is going to be like. I originally wrote all the Snape and Harry scenes more than a year ago, so I'm taking old material and trying to wrap it up into a cohesive story with the way the story has grown. It will probably be more of a "scene here", cute stuff "scene here" "aw poor Harry" type of the rest of the story but i need to get back and somehow get everything to blend and work RIGHT, something that I'm not up to right now as I really need to get the future stuff out first before I could see where I needed to meld it, lol. But thank you so much for your review. :) I'm glad you were able to be patient and get through it.
| Title: Chapter 19: The Splotches | 05 Jun 2006 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
I read the last two chapter, cause I missed the last one somehow. Wonderfully done and so glad you updated! And hear chap. 20 will be coming along soon? You rock! These chapters were very funny! I love the Snape/Harry interaction and hope there will be more of it soon!
Great job!
Author's Response: Yup, I just posted chapter 20. Enjoy and thank you for your review! I appreciate it.| Title: Chapter 20: Secret Accident | 07 Jun 2006 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- OH, another chapter! You are so wonderful!!! I loved it! Poor Harry having an accident! I know how that can feel, as I have a young daughter, who occassionally has an accident. It's very neat how Snape helped him out, of course he had no choice, but he did a good job of it, and stayed in character. I do think he was a bit of a git to tell Hoppity, but I liked how you had Harry apologize to him and Snape patted the top of his head. I think he's starting to develop a soft spot for his young charge. I so love this story and hope you can update again soon! It's fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks so much carrie! :D Hehe, but Snape IS a git, isn\'t he?
| Title: Chapter 21: Velveteen Rabbit (Sick Harry) | 17 Jul 2006 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
Aw, great update, Jan. Harry getting sick. I feel so sorry for him. It's great how Snape took a turn watching over him like that, even reading him a story! So cute!
Hope you can update again soon with more Snape/Harry interaction!
Great job!
Author's Response: Hehe, he sure did read him a story! *sneaky* Thank you for the review! More Snape and Harry coming up!
| Title: Chapter 18: The Visit | 25 Aug 2006 |
| Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) |
- Somehow I missed reviewing for this chapter and reading it too, so I read it yesterday, and let me just say it was fabulous! I loved how Snape was so 'nice' to Harry and held him on his lap and carried him and everything. Bet he and Harry were glad when that was over. Still, I can see Snape slowly softening towards Harry a bit, but still staying in character. Great job again, and I have read all the way up to chapter 21, and it's awesome what you've got! I really hope you can update soon and please continue with this story, because it's awesome! It's one of my favs!
Author's Response: Woot! Thanks. :D I\'m soo glad that you are enjoying it! I\'ll be sure to keep going as long as I have readers like you.