the Grey Cat
Ravenclaw!
When Severus took the Dark Mark, he lost more than he imagined, but with the help of a meddlesome Headmaster and a diary from a time long forgotten, Severus gets a chance at fatherhood, if he himself can survive the encounter. **Rewrite well in progress**
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Alexis8907
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Aug 2008 / 23 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Aug 2008 / 23 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Is Anyone Here Alive | 24 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Not a bad start so far. I'm curious to see where you will go with this. I'm not sure if you mentioned it or not, but how old is Harry?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Harry is ten years old, this is the summer of his eleventh birthday. Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 2: Between You and I | 29 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- I wonder what Severus' reaction will be when he learns Harry is his son. Hopefully he will go soon and save Harry from the dreadful Dursleys. Another good chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Well, it's all coming up next chapter. Severus lets us into his head for awhile as well as make a little visit to Privet Drive. I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for reviewing and the next chapter should be up sometime during the weekend!
| Title: Chapter 3: Champagne is for Celebrating | 07 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Please let Severus hex Vernon!! That stupid mean man needs to get cursed for treating Harry that way. Very good chapter and pretty please update again soon!! :)
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm pretty sure Severus has got some spell stashed up his sleeve for Vernon once he realizes what happened...
Thanks for the review!! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Next update will probably come this weekend.
| Title: Chapter 4: Never Too Late | 15 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Yay! Sev has come to take Harry away from those stupid Dursleys. I hope that Sev will turn around and come back to hex Vernon after he sees Harry's back. I would love to see a scene like that! Anyway, this was an excellent chapter filled with really good emotions for the charcaters. Hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response:
Belive me, Sev won't let the Dursleys get away with treating Harry as they have...when he finds out.
I'm really glad you liked this chapter, it was fun to get inside their heads for a bit.
Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 5: Frost and Front Steps | 26 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Very good chapter. I liked how you switched from Sev's POV to Harry's. It helped see what each person was thinking. Poor Harry is going to have to learn Severus' rules quickly otherwise the man will lose his patience with the boy. Great chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Yup, Harry's going to have to learn fast, or Sev's going to have to explain fast what's going on...we'll see what happens.
I hope I can update soon too, but this chapters proving to be a toughie!
Au: Second Year. A little bit of healthy snooping reveals some old documents that will have Harry's life quickly spiralling out of control and have him questioning: Who Am I?
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Jul 2008 / 24 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Jul 2008 / 24 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Fame is a Fickle Friend | 19 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good chapter. I wonder if Harry will remember to change everything back before he gets to Snape's class. I loved his answer for the test too. That was great! :)
Author's Response:
It's great that characters can get away with things that I never could. :) Snape's class next chapter. :)
| Title: Chapter 4: The Disembodie Voice | 29 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good chapter. Nice twist having Severus hear the voice too. Hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: I will soon. It is in the process of betaing. Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy
| Title: Chapter 5: A Disgusting But Lucrative Business | 12 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Good chapter! Percy seems to be annoying Harry quite a lot lately. I wonder what's up with him. Please update again soon! :)
Author's Response: That will be answered much later on :)
| Title: Chapter 6: I Wish I Might | 25 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Dun dun dun.... What's Harry going to say now? Great chapter and I really hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah he's in a tight spot!
| Title: Chapter 7: Meeting Cyrus | 05 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) |
- Veeery interesting twist! I never suspected Blaise would be related to Harry. Hope you can update again soon!
Author's Response: That's why I've made Blaise related to Harry... it was unexpected. :)