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After the Battle, the only thing that Harry wants to do is rest, but he notices that there is something that he needs to do first: bring Snape's body back to Hogwarts. Ron and Hermione will be there to help him, while they deal with the effects of the war and learn to find hope where there seemed to be none. Once they find out that certain Potions Master is not as dead as they thought he was, things will start to change. (Snape!Lives)

Takes Place: 7th summer, 7th Year, 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry), 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean
Tags: Depression Recovery, Injured!Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Panic attack
Chapters: 27 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 May 2024 / 13 Oct 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Getting closer 22 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    It's so nice to see Snape being patient with Harry. I'm happy that Harry snapped and revealed how distressed he was feeling. It's the first step to healing 


Title: Chapter 16: At Snape's home 23 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    Oh how intense it was!! I'm upset with Severus but I understand he has a lot to unpack before he'll be able to open up to Harry. Thank you for this chapter, I'm sorry for Harry but I'm glad they had this conversation 


Title: Chapter 18: Of drinkable fire, silver grass and wooden benches 23 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    The conversation between Harry and Severus was amazing! So intense! Oh and I adore the way you manage to write Severus being vulnerable through details <3


Title: Chapter 19: New beginnings 23 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    I'm sorry about your mother but I'm glad that writing helps you. This chapter is beautiful. Thank you!


Title: Chapter 21: Snape's laboratory 23 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    I hope you'll figure everything out irl <3. I loved this chapter, the way Severus is able to comfort Harry is precious. Thank you!


Title: Chapter 22: Gringotts 24 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    What a great update! I didn't expect you to discuss suicide themes in this chapter but I'm so glad Harry and Severus have discussed it eventually, it was really important. And I can't express how smooth their conversations feel despite heavy topics. Thank you once again and merry Christmas to you too!! <3



    Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your comments! They were the best kind of reviews a fanfiction writer can get as it's great to see which parts you enjoyed reading the most and why. So really thank you! I hope you had a great christmas too! :)

Title: Chapter 23: Knockturn Alley 06 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    I'm glad to hear you've figured everything out (well, more or less). I wish you and your partner a happy 2024! I hope this year will be better. I wish you happiness and success in whatever you're doing right now <3

    That was a wonderful update. Pretty light and really heartwarming :). I'm glad Harry chose "Evans" surname and not something random. It means a lot! Oh and it would be intriguing to see Snape switch back to his death eater disguise, especially considering Harry will be with him at that time hehe. And it's also so nice to see how Snape opens up to Harry



    Author's Response: Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

Title: Chapter 24: Borgin & Burkes 15 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    That's a nice chapter! And yes I loved to see Snape in spy mode haha, he was convincing :). Looking forward to read the second half of this visit to the Borgin & Burkes. Thank you and have a nice day! <3



    Author's Response: Im glad you liked it! Thank you 😊

Title: Chapter 25: At the cafe 20 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    That was a wonderful chapter! I absolutely love the long and thoughtful conversation between Severus and Harry. The way you wrote Severus slowly opening up to Harry is precious. It's so funny but great to see him struggling with finding the right words when he tries not be his usual snarky and sarcastic self haha. I'm glad Severus talks to Harry and reassures and supports him and says that he's going to support Harry's decision no matter what :). Oh and it's so heartwarming to see how Harry got attached to Severus. Ah, how I love this chapter.

    I'm sorry about your mother. Please stay safe! I wish you all well <3 



    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your detailed comment. I loved it! :) And writing Snape struggling to be nicer it?s really enjoyable. Sometimes it?s hard to find the right words but once I do it?s great to reread those conversations! At the end of the day, I?m grateful that people like my story, but if I keep writing it is cause I enjoy the dynamics between the characters and their evolution. And those conversations between Harry and Snape are my favorites! :D

When Harry is found guilty at the Ministry trial following the dementor incident, drastic measures must be taken to ensure his continued safety and freedom.

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate
Tags: Disguised!Harry, Disguised!Snape
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Sep 2023 / 23 May 2023
Series: It Takes a Village - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 04 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Ra_Mur (Signed)

    What a nice story, thank you!!



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