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HBP Alternative Universe. Harry acquires a surprising new ally as he struggles to overcome his grief and accept the burden of the Prophecy.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jun 2008 / 01 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 07 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Another great chapter! Good for Harry that Snpae is so understanding. I'm looking forward to the birthday party :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Harry and Severus should start making some big steps in their relationship soon, and I hope you'll like the party.

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 12 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A brilliant chapter again. I especially love the part when Harry invites Severus to his birthday party - really nicely done :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you, teddy!  Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 17 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Oh, Snape is really getting nice - playing chess with Harry in the middle of the night is an immense progress. Great chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it - keep on posting faster, good idea :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus couldn't help feeling a bit sympathetic with Harry and realized that a distraction would be help him to get the nightmare off his mind.  Oh, I don't think I can post any faster, but thanks!  

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 23 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Oh, what a cute chapter :-). Severus and Harry telling each other about their childhood is great! Looking forward to the update :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 28 Oct 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Oh, poor Harry - being reminded of Sirius again :-(
    Yet another chapter?! Wow, I have to read on...

    Author's Response: Thanks, but not another chapter, I'm afraid.  I accidently double posted.  When I tried to delete it, it looked like I might delete the whole story, so I'm going to wait to see what to do. 

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 02 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Another great chapter - I loved the interaction between Severus and Harry here. How good that Severus could help Harry with his nightmare and his dreams! Looking forward to more :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you, Teddy!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 11 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Oh no... why did you stop here? Normally, I'm aware of the fact that it's only a chapter and will be finished soon, but here I just got so engrossed with the story - and suddenly it was over... sorry for babbling, hope you understand what I mean - anyway... great chapter! Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Teddy!  That's a huge compliment!  It means a lot to me.  I know what you mean about fanfiction, though--one of the few advantages of written books is that you can read the whole story at one go.  On the other hand, finding a good fanfic site is like finding a library with thousands of books all about your favorite characters--it's hard to beat!  

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 21 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A great chapter again! Amazingly written :-)
    Good that Severus made a room for Harry and allowed him to stay there.
    I'm looking forward to the next chapter - and to your Christmas story, too, of course :-)
    Greetings
    teddy

    Author's Response: Thanks, Teddy!  Glad you liked it, and I hope you'll like the Christmas story too!

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 28 Nov 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    A great chapter again - especially the description of Harry's feelings. I like the interactions between Snape and Harry in your story!
    Hope to talk to you again, soon :-)
    teddy

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Teddy,

    Thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it.  Harry and Severus are always fun to write!


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 09 Dec 2007
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed)
    Another great chapter, and the chapter wasn't confusing at all - only for Harry for obvious reasons :-)
    I still love your story :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you, Teddy!  I'm so happy you liked it!  I love your stories, too!  Both "Elixir" and "Turn of the Tide" are awesome! 


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