Ravenclaw!
A slight twist to the usual deaging stories. What if the accident created a gas? What if it affected the entire class? How does Snape deal with fifteen toddlers?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jade_Sullivan
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2007 / 15 Sep 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2007 / 15 Sep 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Nursery School, Part 2 | 05 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This is seriously the best (and least annoying) baby fic I've ever read. This chapter especially made me laugh, because the things Harry and Draco do as toddlers are so...realistic...the clinginess, the kick to the forehead, the post-bath chase. I also love how you've included Remus in this. I loved the scene where he and Harry were looking at the photo album together.
*sigh* Reading this chapter has made me happy :) Keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad that you like it! And I'm glad my toddlers are still realistic. It's been a while since I've been surrounded by little toddlers.
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Harry is hurt and loses his voice. Will Snape help him find it again?
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007
Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007
Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 02 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Such a lovely chapter.
I loved these lines:
And with that he stalked over to the boy to drive his message home. Dropping to his knees and gripping Harry's shoulders he stated slowly and clearly, "I do not want you to end up like me!"
Two more tears dropped heavily down the boy's cheeks, now flushed red with emotion, and he sucked them in through his lips as if he could hide them.
I'm glad you included this chapter. The loose ends can wait. lol. Great job :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks I'm glad you like it :) That bit was one of my favourites too.
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 29 Jun 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- This is really a good story! It's original, and I love how Snape is taking care of Harry, even if he tries to tell himself he doesn't really want to do it.
Author's Response:
Hee, yes, Snape is a wee bit reluctant, but that doesn't seem to stop him, does it?
Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 16 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- *sigh* I love this story. The relationship between Snape and Harry that you've created is sweet, but not TOO sweet, if that makes sense... I wish the chapters were longer... :( Hahaha. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
Heh, well you can have longer chapters with a longer wait for updates, or shorter chapters and quicker updates?
Actually, the chapters are just short because that's how they flow, thematically.
Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 24 Jul 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Ha! Go Snape! I'm so glad Vernon got his. Great chapter ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! Very glad you liked it.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 21 Aug 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- I loved this chapter! Turns out I actually found Hyper Harry more adorable than annoying...lol. And the story about Luka is believable and really seems to flow well with the story. I loved the bit at the end where Severus gave Harry the stuffed animal to sleep with. Nice job! I'm so glad you decided to stay up and post this, as I really enjoy this story and have been anxious for an update. Can't wait until the next one :)
Author's Response:
Heh, that bit with the stuffed animal was a bit that's been floating around in my head since I began this story, and I'm glad I found a place to use it. And I'm glad you liked it! It's a little thing, but a big step for Snape.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 03 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Great chapter!! I think this one is my favorite so far, and I've enjoyed every single chapter :) I love how you described Snape's emotions as Harry unwrapped his gift. And I'm so glad Severus showed Ron some compassion in this chapter as well. I've really been looking forward to an uupdate this story! Thank you!
Author's Response:
It took me a while to get to it, but once I started writing that chapter was one of the easiest and most fulfilling. I'm glad you liked it so much.
And yes, I wanted Severus and Ron to sort of get along and not fall into cliched behaviour.
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 10 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- Oh, I loved this chapter! I actually didn't catch the plot hole, but I'm glad you added this chapter, because it was really lovely. At this point, is Snape aware of Vernon's abuse towards Harry? He didn't seem surprised, and I couldn't remember if Harry had told him or not. Anyway, excellent chapter. I really enjoyed it :)
Author's Response:
Yep, Snape is definitely aware. He discovers the abuse at the very end of Chapter 1.
I'm actually pretty glad for this chapter, too :)
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 19 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- That was lovely. You're really doing a great job with this story. Keep it up! I just love how you've written Harry; he's so sweet. And I'm looking forward to future chapters about the fate of Harry's attackers! :)
Author's Response: Awww, thank you. We will learn the fate of the attackers very, very soon!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 25 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) |
- That was wonderful. I feel like I've been reading quite a few Albus-bashing fics lately, and to say the least, it has been a strangely satisfying experience. lol.
I'm a sucker for Snape picking up Harry and holding him. It's so incredibly sweet.
You've been on quite an updating kick lately, and I LOVE it. Thanks so much for the latest installment of this story. :)
Author's Response:
I'm actually not trying to vilify Dumbledore, rather just to show that he's flawed. But I understand what you mean :)
And yeah, I've been updating more lately because I've finally hit the pieces I wrote months ago. I have not written this story in a linear manner AT ALL, lol.