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Reviews by Foolish Wishmaker
Harry is eight years old and is sent to live with Snape. Will Snape ever lighten up enough to notice Harry's problems? Abused!Harry, Guardian!Severus, No slash.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Aug 2009 / 20 Aug 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Really great story, I couldn't stop reading until I finished what you have so far! A slight twist to the usual deaging stories. What if the accident created a gas? What if it affected the entire class? How does Snape deal with fifteen toddlers?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Sep 2007 / 15 Sep 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
I wonder if Dumbledore really will be blind/stupid enough to not take the abuse accusations seriously. Poor Snape might have to adopt Harry after all, and I'm not sure Harry will be very thrilled with that once he is returned to normal age. Harry is hurt and loses his voice. Will Snape help him find it again?
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007 Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
Poor Harry, though. I wonder what really happened to him. Author's Response: Yeah, Harry's not having too easy a time of it in this story. Thanks ùagain for reviewing.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's managing to justify it to himself, for the moment, lol.
I think this is strongest chapter so far in terms of getting emotion across, and I think you're doing a good job with Snape's character. Author's Response: Thank you, that chapter is one of my favourites so far.
Great chapter! Author's Response: Not too badly, I don't think. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Things are getting there for Harry, although there will be a few bumps in the road...
Thanks for the review! Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007 Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
I've found that with slash and with argued-about het pairings, you pretty much have to state that you're going to do it before you even begin. It's annoying, but seems to avoid problems. Harry/Draco isn't one of the pairings I like (in fact I don't ship any of the younger characters, het or slash), but at least as a slasher I wouldn't be upset to have a story suddenly turn a Harry and Draco friendship into a relationship. However, a sudden infusion of Harry/Ginny always annoys me greatly, so I understand those people who get upset. James Potter did something unforgiveable and nobody knew about it... until now. What will the knowledge of this sin do to Severus and his perfectly (until now) isolated life?
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Drug use, Self-harm
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Aug 2007 / 04 May 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
I have noticed several places in this and previous chapters where there's a lack of clarity in your dialog. For example: “Calming Draught,” Snape explained. He reached a hand to Harry’s face but Harry flinched back. He noticed then that his face was wet. Had he been crying? He wiped his tears away, roughly. “Sorry,” Harry croaked, embarrassed. It sounds like "He reached" is Snape. If "He noticed" is Harry, it should be on a separate line, because otherwise it sounds like it's Snape, which then makes it sound like Snape is the one who wiped Harry's face, roughly. It doesn't sound like that was the intention. Author's Response: Eek, thanks so much for noticing that mistake of mine. I'll get it fixed up quick. Thank you so very much for your constructive review. I means alot to me. |
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