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Reviews by Foolish Wishmaker
A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Harry Potter is badly abused by the Dursleys, but he finds a new way to defend himself. Could this be "the Power the Dark Lord knows not"? Who is going to help Harry? Harry-Snape bonding/mentorship. AU Pre-HBP
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Nov 2008 / 31 Jan 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! The prologue was the worst one to write, really. You know how you want to develop the story, but you don't know how to start. It's really angsty, those three pages took years to write ^_^
Author's Response: Well... I actually rewrote that letter a couple of times ^_^ The signature was a difficult point, because I did not know if I had to let Harry sign as HP or HJP. But in the end I decided for HJP for two reasons: first of all it's a way for Harry to state that he acknowledges he is his father's son and that he cannot change that, but on the other hand it also puts weight on his apology for what his father and godfather did. It's a sort of "I know who I am and I respect my family, although they were not perfect". But it does have the effect of making Severus angry. Harry wanted to enforce his apology, but Severus chooses to accept it as an insult instead.
Author's Response: Yup. Severus would never settle for anything less than spectacular, isn't it? :) Our Snape is too good for little mistakes, so I had to find something big. But I do feel guilty. :)
Author's Response: I really feel guilty as well for doing that to them, actually! But I'll make it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so happy that you liked how I "sketched" the characters. It really was very difficult, but I am happy with the results now. And I apologize for posting the new chapter so late. I had it almost done by April 15th, then I had to travel for over one month and when I came back I found that my desk at work was seriously risking breaking due to the heaps of paper on it. And it took more than one month to sort it all out. Now I can finally write again! Thanks for your patience! Au: Second Year. A little bit of healthy snooping reveals some old documents that will have Harry's life quickly spiralling out of control and have him questioning: Who Am I?
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Jul 2008 / 24 Mar 2008 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Curiosity killed the cat... hehehe! Harry is a curious boy by nature it isn't just going to stop. You may have noticed that 'my' Harry has a more darkly sardonic humour and isn't quite as stupid at times as the coventional Harry - (Just out of interest I could never understand why Harry and Ron just wait by the stupid car - and how did Ron get the blasted engine running... where were the keys?) More soon. Promise
Perhaps that alone will make a big difference in the relations between Snape and Harry. Author's Response: Perhaps... I just hate in when Harry is a 'reckless dimwit' (I might borrow that phrase sometime!) More soon. |
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