Gryffindor!
Albus Dumbledore admits he often asks too much, but this time he has decided to ask something altogether different. With the shadows of war encircling them all, it will take incredible wit and strength to see his soldiers through to the end. What he needs, more than anything, is for them to work together - and Albus is nothing if not full of ideas on how to make the impossible happen.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by KimSpiritTalks
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2011 / 17 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2011 / 17 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: What She Died For | 17 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- I am really enjoying this and I hope that there's a lot more to come. Its very well written, believable, and interesting to boot. I just love it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your compliments, and most of all for your explanation on how Dumbledore made you feel. I'm striving for a more human Dumbledore - meddlesome, yes, but human - and to know that someone else sees that gives me a great sense of accomplishment! <3
AU / Death Eaters besiege Hogwarts. A spell from Dumbledore is going astray. A cauldron explodes during potions class. And the old castle enfolds its own magic. Can some students survive the next twenty-one days?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began | 03 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next installment. I'm really curious to see where you're going with it.
AU. Harry is sorted into Slytherin. How different would Harry's life have been if he had never been a Gryffindor?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Mar 2013 / 21 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 Mar 2013 / 21 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 7: Alone? | 13 Oct 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- I like your story. Harry standing up for Hermione is perfectly Harry like. Though in canon he did hold predjudices against the Slytherins in some ways, the rest of his personality seems to suggest that he wouldn't allow someone to hurt if he could help it, and he wouldn't care what others thought of him for doing something about it. That's my favorite part of your story so far. The rest is really good, too. I like how the first years came back to Harry's side the minute he needed help. Good story!
After arriving back at school a week early, Harry's new school year is set to be filled with mystery and adventure. Who is the Whispering Man and what does his presence at Hogwarts mean? Is the Wizarding World safe now that He Who Must Not Be Named is returning to power? Join the adventure as Harry, Ron and Hermione navigate their Fourth Year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Azkaban Character, Elves, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
| Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man | 22 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- I'm enjoying your story. I love your new teacher but I especially loved how poor Malfoy's first Defense class went. Your characters are quite, well, in character, and believable and funny, too. Great work!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you thank you thank you!! Glad you like Prof. Ferro! I really did love being mean to Malfoy - is that wrong..? Excellent, glad my characters are believable and pleased you find them funny!! Here's your Chocolate Frog, virtual card and all!!
| Title: Harry Potter and the Whispering Man | 29 May 2013 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- I hadn't checked for updates at P&S for months, and when I finally remembered to, I saw you'd updated several chapters. I was thrilled, and you didn't disappoint. This is an excellent story. I truly love the fun between Harry and Ron and Fred and George, and, well, every other student that's acted like the kids they are in your story. The teachers are great, too. I really love Ferro and FINALLY we hear who The Whispering Man is. Impressive twist! Your story is just plain fun. Thanks so much for sharing it. But please fix Harry quickly, the poor boy is going to have a heart attack if he stays in this state much longer!
Author's Response:
Oh, what an absolutley wonderful review, thank you so much!! Haha, yes, the Whispering Man is no longer a mystery - thank god.
Writing at the moment, so I hope to update soon!! Again, thank you so much for this review, it made me smile so much!!
P.S. So glad you like Ferro, too!!
If especially strong-willed, sometimes the dead can interfere with the events of the living. Lily Evans is a very strong-willed woman and is not happy with the course of events in her son's life. She is planning, and slowly building her energy so that she can step in and set things to right.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2011 / 11 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2011 / 11 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 24 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Looks interesting. You write well, which is half the battle, and the premise is great. I'm heading to chapter two with high expectations.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you think I write well. I am really trying improve my creative writing so it is nice to hear that I am not failing entirely!
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 24 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Definitely interesting. I love your Snape and Lily's intervention. I'm glad I found your story.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 24 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Still going well. I love Lily! She's doing great things. I'm having fun reading your story.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 24 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Awesome chapter! I loved the Potions class and Lily's messages to Snape!
Author's Response: Thanks, this was the chapter I was really looking forward to writing!
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 06 Sep 2011 |
| Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) |
- Nice story! I love the premise. I'll be waiting anxiously for your next update.