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At the Dursleys the summer after Sirius' death, Voldemort sends werewolves to attack Harry. Taken to Grimmauld Place by his rescuer, Severus Snape, Harry devises a disastrous plan to rescue Sirius from the veil, resulting in his being transfigured into a baby. Snape is the only one who can brew the potion to restore him, and is the only one to realize that Harry still retains his 16 year-old-mind. Over the summer and the first two potions which restore him to age eleven, Harry begins to feel that Snape is the only one who understands and can protect him. Is he right or has his deaging muddled his thinking? AU story for 6th year.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 26 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2007 / 15 May 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: Settling in to Hogwarts 15 Aug 2008
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    This is so very good! I'm excited to see how Snape is going to deal with Draco and his desire for revenge and how Harry is going to get over the torture.

Harry is hurt and loses his voice. Will Snape help him find it again?

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 15 Jan 2007
Series: Going Through the Motions - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 30 Aug 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    Wonderful job so far! I love the backstory with Luka and Snape, something completely unexpected but you wrote it so believable!

    I'm so impressed with how in-character Snape is in your story, even though he's allowing Harry into his rooms and taking care of him, he's still got his inner snarkiness.

    Great job and I can't wait till the next part is posted!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad the Luka story seemed believable.  I was worried it might be over the top.

     

    Chapter 12 is up! 


Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 06 Sep 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    Oh, bravo! I loved so much about this chapter! Harry's appreciation of the gloves, Ron's interactions with Snape and Snape casting charms on both of the boys. So very sweet.

    The coupons are a brilliant idea! I can't wait to see what situation Snape would want to use one.

    Author's Response: Snape is going to save them for some very important moments, and that's all I can say ;)  Thanks for your kind words.

Harry gets some surprising news. He was adopted. His father is alive and he has a brother; named Severus Snape. Beta'd by breannatala

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaging
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2007 / 23 May 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 23: When the Kicked Dog Bites Back 29 Aug 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    Great job! I'm normally not a fan of "Harry's really related to Snape" stories but this one was awesome! I loved Tobias, you did such a great job with him! Eileen was wonderfully bad as well! I can't wait to read the sequel!

Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 31 Aug 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    I am loving this story! The characterization of both Harry and Snape is spot on and your dialogue is awesome!

    Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 31 Aug 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    Yay new chapter! I'm loving the snarkiness between the two in this chapter. Great dialog!

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 04 Oct 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    Wow, this chapter was excellent! I loved that Harry made the choice in a mature fashion to come back for Snape. I was expecting him to come back, but I thought it would be more about his saving people thing rather than a thought-out reason.

    Also, I loved the duality expressed in Harry thinking that people always die and they never come back and Snape repeating the same thing. Such similar damaged boys.

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 30 Jul 2008
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    I really enjoyed this. I wasn't sure where it was going as the conversation between Harry and Snape started, but it was very good. I like that it isn't easy for Harry. Most of these sort of stories, Snape is the one confused and Harry wants him to be all dad-like. I like that Harry isn't sure how to have a relationship that isn't friendship or enemies.

    Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!

As a first year, Harry is sorted into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor, and no one is more surprised than his new Head of House.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 51 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Mar 2009 / 21 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 08 Aug 2008
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    oh, oh, oh! I can't believe it but you made the Mirror of Erised even more heartbreaking than in the books.

    Wonderful job so far! I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens next (and I'm so excited that Ron and Harry are at least civil to each other in the end of this chapter).

Sequel to Brothers and Fathers. Tobias, Severus, and Harry are at Hogwarts and school is in session. But nothing can ever be easy for the Snape family.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Big Brother Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Oct 2010 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Revelations, Good and Bad 02 Oct 2007
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed)
    You are like an updating machine! :)

    I loved the conversation between Tobias and Severus so very much. Severus being worried about being a good dad and Tobias being so gentle and earnest was awesome. I'm glad he finally told!

    Author's Response:

    *squeel* Glad you enjoyed it. I was really worried about the conversation. I actually had it planned out completely differently, but when I started writing it just went a completely different direction. I think I like it better this way. Anyway, It will probably be two weeks before the next update.

    Thanks for the review.

    DaughterOfAres.



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