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Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen: Happy Christmas, you prat.
| 01 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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this is quite honestly one of the most well-developed snape/harry stories i've ever read. i love how you didn't make them insta-loving, as most people tend to do, and kept snape in character. your plot is good and has no holes i can find. keep updating, it's so good!
Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Saturday
| 23 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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Wow. This chapter was worth the wait! I figured Snape knew something about it, but I didn't think he'd straight-up wait that night. I understand your business, but please try to update soon!
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Squabbling
| 20 Jan 2008
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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AGH! A cliffhanger!!! I think it's interesting how you foiled the reactions of Hermione and Ron against each other...I though Hermione would act like it was good for him. But this chapter was really pleasing, thanks.
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Picnic
| 16 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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eek!!! so many ways to go from that point!!! update soon, please please please!!!!!
After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 16 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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i'm really liking this. it's hitting a point that j.k didnt outright state from the get-go (in fact, it was left out until the very end of the series--- in case you couldnt figure it out, i'm speaking of Snape's protection of Harry) though the plot seems unstable (haha, plotless stories r the best, cuz they can go in any direction...unless that's not what you want) but, yeah, i like it and am so glad you're deciding to keep it going.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! As for the direction of the plot, I'm only on the fourth chapter, and I've got a lot more planned for it. The next couple of chapters should bring everything a bit more together. I happen to be a fan of stories that keep you guessing, so I suppose that is what is coming across in my fic. I'm glad you're enjoying it, though :)
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Stop and think, for a while.
| 28 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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It's brilliant. I love how depressive Lily is, and Harry is adorable. But I hate that he threw the unicorn horn into the lake...I really hate that part. But it's your story, so whatever. You're doing a great job, and it's pretty funny.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like the way I have the characters- i thought it would be quite funny to portray them like that! Hope you're still enjoying the story!
After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior. There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - More Changes
| 31 Dec 2007
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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Wow. I'm really enjoying this story. I like the idea of Snape being poor, and you're doing a great job of making him a jerk. I don't care what other people say, if you like the story, you can write it. It's yours, not theirs. Keep writing, it's soo good!
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Hate
| 16 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: ttlyWitching (Signed)
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gah. this is probably one of my favorite stories ever. mostly i write about snape as a double character that is nice, but sometimes it's nice to see him be the jerk he was intended to be. i hope you can update soon
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