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| dancingkatz [Contact]
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| Christine Krebs (female)
| Member since: 08 Sep 2007
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| Beta-reader, Proofreader, Writer, Musician, Singer, Composer, Poet, Cat-Slave, Scuba diver, Ballroom Dancer, Cantor, Photographer, Night Owl who will eventually have a story or two posted on this site once the ones I'm working are are complete. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six
| 08 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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I don't think it ended on an odd note. I enjoyed this chapter very much (As I have the previous ones). I am looking forward to seeing what the rest of Harry's birthday is going to be like. Blueberry pancakes and sausage links are my favourite breakfast, too, and now I'm hungry from reading about them. I especially loved the image of Harry sliding down the bannister. Bravo for your excellent storytelling!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it. It's nice to have one's hard work appreciated. Harry is the easy one to write about. Children that age are wonderful and full of mischief. I know that I wouldn't have been able to resist the bannister either. To be perfectly honest, I would STILL be tempted now. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 20 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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This is perfect just as it is, but I can certainly see it as the jumping off point for a multi-chapter fic. So if you have the inclination, I'd be interested in seeing where you take the storyline from here, especially the Draco part of things.
The Battle of Hogwarts has finally finished, but at a great cost. Harry no longer has anything to live for, and has come to two conclusions: either he commits suicide, or he changes the past, in order to be reunited with his loved ones. Deciding to choose the latter, he sets about his quest to vanquish evil for once and for all – by returning to that fateful night where it all began. True to his luck, he arrives too late. Follow Harry’s quest to change the past for the better.
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 7
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Completed: No
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Updated: 13 Apr 2010 / 14 Feb 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Friendly Fire
| 28 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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A most excellent chapter! I'm really enjoying what you're doing with this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm enjoying writing it too! ...I actually thought the next chapter would be really interesting, but it seems to be dragging. whoops? xD ~shige
Title: Chapter 1: Declarations of insanity
| 17 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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Most intriguing and fun. I really like Mahalestro. I hope you post chapter two soon!
Title: Chapter 5: Midnight Frolic
| 28 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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I definitely liked this (especially the foals comments about Harry's appearance) and am looking forward to more. Good work!
Author's Response: Thanks and hope you like the next part. The unicorn foals are fun to write they're like curious kids.
Title: Chapter 6: Midnight Resolution
| 01 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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Hmmm? To never have to return to Privet Drive again? To talk to him about his Mum? I really don't know but I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. I really, really like your story and was so happy to wake up to a new chapter this morning.
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like what happens next. Definitely he doesn't want Harry at Privet Drive any longer.
Title: Chapter 7: Midnight on Privet Drive
| 02 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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Scrofulous mumbletonia storafata! I'm certain that Petunia and Vernon think it's the Black Plague or something when (if it exists) is likely a minor problem contracted by wizarding houseplants. I'm still laughing about that.
But I was crying along with Harry on the Knight Bus and loving Severus for making it possible for Harry to finally tell what his "family" did every summer. And I just wanted to hug Severus as he told his own story.
This is a fabulous story!
Author's Response: yeah or something like that. Severus is one clever wizard. I know, I was crying as I was writing that. They're both so damaged it's hard not to feel awful for them. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 8: Midnight's Justice
| 04 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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This was great! It's about time that the Dursleys got what was coming to them. I wait with bated breath for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yeah, I agree. You won't have to wait long, since I just updated this!
Title: Chapter 30: Midnight Initiation
| 07 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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This was a beautiful chapter!
Title: Chapter 33: Midnight Sight
| 19 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
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Excellent chapter! I vote for Paladin as Harry's Unicorn name. I look forward to the next chapter very much.
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